Thaveraiik Vallouioux Karthreil, also known by many other names such as The Calamity, Scorched Earth, and many more, is a very tired dragon. One of his age doesn't have time for petty squabbles and even eating for the most part. Of course, as is tradition, he makes exceptions for those hoping to skim his hoard.
The usual scorch and chomp after they inevitably upset the delicate balance upon which the hoard sits, waking the dragon up. What usually doesn't happen, is a pony walking straight to the enormous draconic being on top of the hoard and bopping them on the snout before yelling "I want my Phylactery back"
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This looks interesting. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Did you mean ultimate? Penultimate basically means “second” in this sense.
Also, you may want to proofread for consistency, as it started in past-tense, and slips into present-tense.
10895255 Yeah a little polish needed, but solid, could be fun. Great silly humor plaid straight here. Lots of potential.
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No, the ultimate ability of a Phylactery is conditional immortality. The penultimate is creating another body to make use of this conditional immortality.
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Hmm, good to know...
How novel, two crotchety old geezers instead of a bunch of young gits running about. How very interesting.
How did you come up with that name?
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Blame Meep the Changeling.