We all know Celestia's, Sunset Shimmer's, And Harry Potter's stories but what if they were all interconnected: as though they were actually..........................family? This will be a Harry PotterXHermione GrangerXSweetie-BelleXApple BloomXScootaloo, and yes they will be a herd. Dumbledore, and Weasley(sans Ginny, twins, Bill, and Charlie) bashing.
I wish to see where this is going
So, if I’m reading this correctly, Harry’s mom was Sunset’s sister…
That is awesome!
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Maybe, maybe not. That decision, I leave to you, the readers.
you have my attention
Red hair, green eyes, Fire Lily... I think I know where this is going. Would be quite ironic if Lily Evans/Potter had the essence of a unicorn (either horn or tail hair) as the core of her wand. After all, "the wand chooses the wizard" (or witch, in this case).
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It would, but you have to remember this takes place after her school years.
Aww but alicorn Sunset is the best Sunset
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If you'd like her to be one I'll make her one.
Of course a certain somepony might beat her to it again.
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YAY TY
This is really good :D
I'm following!!!!
Query: What should Sunset's wand be made of, and should Harry's be custom-made or canon-made?
VOTE NOW!
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as for sunset i'll say cedar, or cherry, or hornbeam, or maple, or vine wood, and a hair from celestia as a core.
as for harry i would stick with Holly wood, but use a alicorn feather from sunset as a core.
also what kind of pony is harry gonna be? a unicorn? a pegasus? a earth pony? a thestral? a crystal pony? a crystal unicorn? or a crystal pegasus? i don't really care either way but unicorn or pegasus make the most sense, unicorn because his mother was one, and pegasus because of his natural flying talents, also if u make him a pegasus and have him visit Equestria at some point you can have sunset give him flying lessons and teach him about other wing/pegasus stuff Preening Etc. as a bonding moment.
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I'll give you a hint: I mentioned it when you asked me to make Sunset an alicorn.
Sounds interresting, but I think you overdid it a bit on the drama and the speed it is progressing with.
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That's the thing: I KNOW what the the story is supposed to be about, but I have a hard time putting it to words. SO FRUSTRATING!
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How about Elder with Celestia's AND Luna's tail hairs? That would do it, wouldn't it? I'm also considering having Sunset win the Elder Wand from Dumbles. Whoa, 2 Elder Wands, that's, that's[As Vizzini] inconceivable!
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sems nice
I regret to inform you that this story has been put on hiatus indefinitely. Reason being: WRITER'S BLOCK AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Help me?
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I know I know, but what can I do? I'm not good at fleshing out my stories.
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[Poison Ivy]: "You'll just have to find out."
Now I'm also confused. Assuming Lily met Sunset at Hogwarts (somehow), begs the question of whether Sunset still was taught at CSGU and mentored under Celestia, and Sunset went to the Potterverse to find her sister.
Is this on hiatus or not?
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It is. That doesn't mean I'm not working on it though.
What sort of Animagus form should Harry, Hermione, 'n' the C.M.C. have, beside their Equestrian forms?
1.) Lycan
2.) Xenomorph
3.) Dragon
4.) Shadow Panther
5.) Dire Wolf
6.) Black Phoenix
7.) Basilisk
8.) Indominus Rex
9.) Velociraptor
10.) Tyrannosaurus Rex
Voting ends: Halloween(or Samhain, if you prefer)
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i say Basilisk, Black Phoenix, Dragon are the most fitting ones
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I'll see what I can do. As for the Dragon, it'll be quadrupedal, just like in “Dragonheart.“
Hmm... Wow
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[Philoctetes]: “My answuh is 2 woirds.“ Time. Dilation.
Did I remove the horcruces too early? Also should I have Bellatrix be a victim of loyalty charms and potions, or just go with canon?
Ah dumbledork he’s always a problem in most fics but was it done with the best of intentions or to manipulate. The Plot thickens.
While I'm happy to see more on this story, I would be even happier if the more was long enough that I didn't have to manually mark the chapter as read. Looks up and sees Sunset Shimmer Uh, no offense.
[Sunset Shimmer]: "If I had a bit for EVERY TIME somepon-ONE said that to me, I'd be richer than Celestia herself!"
[Me]: "Sorry! Sorry! First time writer."
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no worries, you're doing just fine. I couldn't resist tossing in a "No offense" since it was a Sunset Shimmer fic. Poor mare goes through hell.
The trick with writing is to not worry about the downvotes. They're going to happen. There's going to be Naysayers (Neighsayers?). Like any craft, your first forays are going to be rough. Take it as a learning experience and refine your craft as you go. Nobody starts out, at any artisitic endeavor as a virtuoso. Take it from someone who spent thousands of hours practicing as a vocalist. I was horrible when I started, but I got better.
And so will you. And you're already pretty darn good.
Should I have Ron "wake up" as well?