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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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Bout time someone wrote a romance story. From what I've seen.

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Well this one has left room for a sequel. Yes I feel like I'm running on empty right now but when it comes to these two, sex and romance are a necessity. I thought that a lesbian romance clop fic for these two would be perfect.

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And there are currently four confirmed mares in the main cast. These two and then the two sisters.

I wonder what fanfics will arise with that information.

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Oh there are a fair amount already. From what I have seen of her, Zipp Storm is likely going to be a bit if not a lot like Rainbow Dash. Pipp looks like she'll be fine but Zipp, I don't think she is going to be a likable character for me. When it comes to Hitch, I'm hoping he will be like Soarin', pretty laid back.

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You didn’t like Rainbow Dash?

And I know there’s at least one other fic that pits the sisters into a really incestous situation.

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Dash simply isn't that relatable of a character for me and with the way she treated Fluttershy for a fair amount of "Hurricane Fluttershy" was just awful. She cared more about a record than she did her friend's feelings.

And damn, I thought I was the first to do a lesbian clopfic involving G5 characters. Hopefully it is still the first anthro lesbian clop fic, at least involving Sunny and Izzy.

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I think you are the first one to do anthro.

Just saying this is only the second fic I’ve seen.

And yeah. Hurricane Fluttershy definitely wasn’t a high point for her.

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Of course I like Fluttershy quite a bit too so her treatment of her until the end didn't sit well with me at all. I was thinking, "Really Dash, you're hurting your friend like that over a damn number? As long as you can get the water up to Cloudsdale, that is all that matters!" Of course I tend to be more of a rational thinker instead of being driven by emotion the way Dash seemed to be.

Oh and I've already got plans for the sequel to this. Sunny and Izzy will be moving in with Izzy's parents and well, it will be kind of awkward despite the parents approving of their relationship....and knowing how Izzy is. Speaking of Izzy, what do you think of the personality I gave her?

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Oh, I haven’t had the chance to read it yet. I was just commenting that it was about time someone did this. This is the first non-incestous G5 romance fic I’ve seen.

I will read it at the first opportunity though

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You'll have to let me know. It is a bit tough but at the same time it is fun. Given we don't know how their personalities will be yet, I just worked with her in how I think she will be based off of what I have seen of her.

Finished it.

Didn't expect Izzy to sound like that teenage popular girl cliche, but seeing as how we don't have much else to go on as far as her personality, I give this a solid A

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Thanks, I just like to give her a silly and cute personality while Sunny is more what one would call "normal" whatever the hell that is. I suppose the brief animations I've seen of her have her acting a bit silly, that is why I gave her the valley girl personality....I know it probably isn't perfect valley girl language but I'm doing it as well as I can.

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It's about as good as I would make it.

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One thing I think this site really needs is a G5 tag since people are writing fics about the new ponies these days. Once the movie comes out G5 might get its own tag. Hey, some of the new ponies have tags so why not the generation as a whole?

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The sequel to this will be fun to write and given that suddenly my creative spark is back, I shouldn't have too many problems writing it. Yeah it won't be something that will be out right away but I'm hoping I won't struggle like I had been until today.

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Well I won't be starting it today, it is too late in the day for me to start anything. I don't want to make any promises but hopefully I'll have it done in a couple of weeks.

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Thanks. I had been working on this one for a while but didn't get anything published until just yesterday.

This was pretty good, and it had an interesting premise. But it really felt stilted and rushed. There was no real detail in the sex scene to make me feel immersed or want to see it drawn out more. The sex talk felt like something out of a porno rather than realistic dialogue. And the environment afterwards was just too blatant and on-the-nose.

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I'm not exactly the best when it comes to clop sometimes....and I won't be doing anything involving these two again until after I watch the movie a few times so I can get their personalities down better.

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The story is complete so there won't be anything further.

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