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Hmm short and sweet, bet it might have caused FLurry to have nightmares, though rather funny that's for sure. maybe a sequel... The world may never know.
Couldn't she just have, oh I don't know, told her?
She could of just told her and if Flurry didn't believe it fully then show her
why write this
1) Pointless plothole, but Flurry was named based on an event after she was born.
2) Plothole with an understandable reason on your part, but Celestia expressed surprise at seeing Flurry was an alicorn in canon. That wouldn't make sense if Celestia gave birth to her.
3) Request for clarification, is it correct to say that in the world of this story, Cadance is not trans or non-binary, instead your Cadance merely doesn't care to correct ponies who use the feminine terms?
4) The therapy bills could have been avoided if Celestia had merely told Flurry that she was her mother and left it at that... But that would have meant no reason for the clopfic.
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No one asked you to begin with.
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The comment section is here to give feedback on fanfics. So I did.
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I guess you're too blinded to have seen the 'alt. Universe' tag, also questioning the use and reason behind a clopfic usally lead to headaches.
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The Alt Universe tag is why I have no problem with Celestia knowing that Flurry was born an alicorn, even though it conflicts with a canon moment. Having them picking "Flurry Heart" before birth simply adds nothing.
Why was this put in the futa group? There's no futas in it. A trap, maybe. But not a futa.