• Member Since 16th May, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 3rd, 2017

Loyal


Just a dude. Writes horsewords... with varying regularity.

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I'll admit right now that I only want to stick with the "Life of A Student", as I don't really care too much about Maggie's background and Ajax is the biggest asshole I've ever seen in a fanfic.
I personally hope Lily goes with Tobias' form for this story, though. Twilight never really struck me as being bi, and I think that just having the two be in a hetero relationship will be cuter than Lily sticking to her "regular" form.

Just my two cents. I really don't want to have stop reading this just because it goes with a pairing I don't like.

Celestia's other student, now? I wondered if she ever revealed it to Twilight?

I will not read until after the live stream

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Have you read the other stories? Twi is bi in this... Twi is sooooo bi in this...

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The doctor at Maggie's. He was Celestia's student before Twilight, but unlike Twilight, he wasn't all that powerful, just specialized and skilled.

1242214 Okay then, but that doesn't mean I'll dislike this pairing any less. F/F ships annoy me for some reason.

hmm, i'm not sure if i want to read the storys about ajax and maggie ... because both are somehow sad and dark.
But you've done a nice job Loyal, and i think most of your readers like the "heavy" stuff better than i.

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I'd hate to lose a devoted reader like you, but I DO need to keep this story accurate to The Lost Chapters and otherwise. Tobias will take the lead in the next chapter for Life of a Student, and will be almost completely clop. Life of a Tyrant is probably the most relevant to the story, since we'll be seeing much string-pulling by Chrysalis behind the scenes.
And as for Life of an Addict...
I just wanted to write crazy/insane, drug-fueled sex.
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Whoever said the doctor wasn't powerful? His calling was just medicine...

1242842 >devoted reader
I'm glad you think of me as one, that means a lot.

it's two am.I despise your brilliant mind so much right now. :twilightangry2::twilightsmile: just kidding. Wouldn't have missed it for the world.

I thought you were going to start Twilight's story with Her and Celstia's first... um... session, this way the really isn't much new information, though I guess it is neat from a different perspective.

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Not all that powerful as compared to Twilight, is what I meant.

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Again, who said he wasn't powerful?
We'll see more of that particular doctor in Life of an Addict

its a energy drink kind of a monster rip off
very good i am liking all of the new chapters and I am particularly enjoying ajax how he is being revealed as someone that doesn't think much but wrap his hands around someones throat and he can be quite cunning:coolphoto:

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Rockstar was around before Monster.
FYI.
And yes. I'm finding myself enjoying Ajax's character much more than I really should be...
It's kind of disturbing...

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I'm not fond of Ajax, but i'm certainly fond of his story, and his brutality. Also, I really love the way you write characters that aren't usually written well. People can never seem to portray Celestia, or Rarity properly, or Twilight is too powerful, or not powerful enough, etc. There are so many elements in your stories done so right compared to so many other people...I just can't stop reading. I don't feel like i'm reading a my little pony fanfiction with your stories, because you take the characters and make them your own.

Why do you not have more followers again? Tis a shame, you might be a better writer than Device Heretic (so sad that he had such bad results because of his writing ;;)

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I wish I knew a way to increase my viewer base... I really do...

Oh shit. Stuffs about to get bad. In a sense of whats happening to the characters in the story, not the the actual story.

hey Loyal you should linkt to the ADKoL at the end !
edit: to the chapter where twilight get laid ...

“Uuh-“ Verse scrambled in that moment, looking between Lily and the imposing magi. In a split second, he did the one thing changelings were meant to do. He lied. “Of course! Hon, you can finish up here?”
I do believe that verse was not born yet good sir :trollestia:

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*edit*
FIXED IT!
Interesting fact: Fixed it before I was allowed to post another comment >.>

that one was good Loyal do you get my PM ?
hope you're not mad that i don't read the other two ...

:twilightsmile: this pleases me greatly :twilightsmile:
Only thing now is that I want to see those two hours :fluttershbad:
Oh well. Back to Borderlands 2.

I feel like whenever you're writing specifics for magical incantations, you're just making shit up. Which, you know, makes sense considering its magic.

I also feel like I should have read this a long time ago, damn vidya games.

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yes
yes
Oh dear god yes (I got it three days ago and have 27 hours logged)

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