Starlight Glimmer!
The village fears the filly who turned the mayor's son into a broom!
Left by her family, banished by a princess, all for beating Twilight Sparkle.
Thankfully, on her dubious, evil trek, a dying, enamoured dragon, vows to assist her. Quiet and competent, Spike is everything she needs. However, all his calm, electrifying quips about her and her body are enough to deck him through a wall!
And Starlight can't tell who she hates more: him, or the world!
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Thanks to everyone that helped edit this! I know I didn't let you get too far in those edits, so if you would like to throw some more in—be my guest! And if you want editing credit, send me a message and I'll get you up there.
For the rest of you readers, I hope you enjoy this story! I plan on following it through with a proper, full-length story someday.
But that'll have to wait for life to pump the brakes!
Until the next story.
~ Yr. Pal, B (Maybe I should have put more "D's" in the title!)
Wow, I like it. It sound chaos XD
When the story is 17k words and named "Prologue" 👀
Second Best Pony and Best Dragon? I don't usually read alternate universe, but color me intrigued!
I love it!
To be honest...it's probably your most redeeming trait, Glimglam.
This is all just begging for a part 2, you know.
Also, FYI, I believe you have a broken tag at the start of the story that has left most of the text for the first section of the story in only bold.
Oh, interesting! Somehow, I missed the AU tag and thought for awhile that this was just gonna be a backstory, but this is a fine darker&edgier AU. I wonder what Twilight's up to, and who, if anyone, replaced her Spike.
Oh dear, that sounds rather severe.
I feel like this story is a great opener to a bigger narrative, though it’s still good by itself. I really like the little backstory touches, and how Starlight seems to be waging a war inside her head.
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Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the save!
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Glad you enjoyed it, kiddo!
nice
Great story so far, but man, I hate her father.
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Aw, shucks! I liked him, as flawed as he was, but I can see why others would not take to him.
Great work B! It's got just the right feels.
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Glad you liked it!
This is awesome my dude!
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Thanks!
What if you find someone else to follow?
Story is awesome. Can't wait full series
Why are there so many dislikes?
I love this
I like Spike x Starlight Glimmer
Will this story still be finished?
Is there more?