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Strip Tease

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Mix-up
Mix-up #1 · Jun 30th, 2021 · · 3 ·
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Oh cute, keep it up

SuperPinkBrony12
SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Jun 30th, 2021 · · 4 ·
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Not bad. Wasn't a big fan of the clop parts, but other than that I think it was decent.

Strip Tease
Strip Tease #3 · Jul 1st, 2021 · · ·
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Thanks! I wanted to add a little naughty part at the end more to illustrate the fact that the magic hadn't made them actual foals but more grown mares that now had a desire to do foal things. Since they are still mares they still have naughty thoughts and desires so I added it. Plus it was a good way to make them tired quickly.

Badguy400
Badguy400 #4 · Sep 22nd, 2021 · · 1 ·
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This was cute. Though I kinda wished that you left the sex person out though… .

In my opinion; abdl is a coping mechanism; not a sex kink.

Greenicedragon1789
Greenicedragon1789 #6 · Oct 14th, 2023 · · ·
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This is good but I spot something that needs to be fix.
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Scootaloo rushed over and began to work [to] burry the package [in] the [pack on] her closet and away from prying eyes.
--to--
Scootaloo rushed over and began to work [on] burry the package [to] the [back of] her closet and away from prying eyes.
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This sounds much better.

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