What if Sunset Shimmer was not born a pony? What if she was more special then she thought? More importantly, what if there was more to the world beyond the mirror portal than first thought?
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What if Sunset Shimmer was not born a pony? What if she was more special then she thought? More importantly, what if there was more to the world beyond the mirror portal than first thought?
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Well, that was... a lot of exposition?
Well I'm still a bit on the fence about this, so far so good but we'll see🤔
I like it. Can you continue it please?
Tirek Lord?
At least on Equestria side they name their people better.
Whoa 2 chapters in 1 day?! I LOVE IT! Keep it up!
I bet Sombra's "walkin' on sunshine."
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Thank you. My current plan is two chapters a month, that might change depending on how busy things get
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Maaaaybe
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There's a teeny, tiny, often-insignificant-but-ever-present flaw in that plan: by the time you finish this masterpiece, I'll be dead.
No joke.
So, how bout, instead of 2 per month, you try 1 per week? You have the option to say no, but I would very much like to be alive by the story's end. So what say you? 1 a week, Yea or nay?
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Maybe. I already have plot points on the next chapters, i just have to write. Like I said it depends on how busy I get. We shall see.
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That's all I ask. Until then, namarie, mellonin.
Excellent work, as always. Can't wait for your next update! Until then, mellonin.
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Thank you
Well that was a great chapter nice job on adding the song it made it even more enjoyable 🥰 Thanks for the chapter🙏😘
Huh🤨didn't not expect for Zuko to be the one coming to this world I was think it would be Korra and Asami since the spirit world was more explored in that series and i was thinking like maybe they came here after the events of the series since it ended with them coming to the spirit world🤔 anywho thanks for the chapters😉
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You're welcome. And Yes, I was originally thinking those two, but then I decided on Zuko, because I really wanted to see two of my favorite redemption characters meeting. And now I have plans for Zuko (including a little ship I like to call 'Sunko')
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[A.J.]: "Didn't see that comin'."
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So, when's the next chapter comin' out?
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Well, after this weekend, I should have more time, so hopefully before Christmas. I've placed my current plan up on my blog
This Story is certanly interresting, even if it feels a bit rushed and the names are a bit weired as well.
Why do I get the feeling that the Sirens have arrived? As always, keep up the good work mellonin!
Hm, I thought she is too old for the Elementary.
Alternative dimension is a airbender dimension. Weird, but okay.
I'm liking it so far.
One point of contention: the word simply is being used far too often, and in most places it's been used, it could be cut altogether.
Well, that was an interesting twist. Just one problem, without Zuko the Avitar is doomed to fail.
So just as I finish Dash swoops in and goes "Dun dun duuuun" LOL
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Yes it is a bit like that isn't.
As for your comment a few chapters back about Zuko, don't worry the avatar world isn't doomed, don't forget that chapter was based around the time when Zuko first got his scar when he was thirteen.
And not to give too much away, but I do have plans for that world, after all, you can't help but wonder what Azula and Ozai's reactions will be to their brother/son showing up with both firebending and magic, and some powerful people/ponies by his side
Great story!
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Thank you
Harry Potter and My Little Pony? Sounds like my kind of crossover
Is that a comic reference?
Well that explains pinkie's hair
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I forgot there was a nice King Sombra in one of the comics, so it's an accidental reference
I though it was texas.
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I really didn't know where it was. I checked all of the MLP wiki's and they never specified where the human Canterlot was located, so I just went with the first USA state that popped into my head
Did Sunset just write in the "journal" I think she's wrote in?
I hope Lily haunts James.
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No, sorry to say it's a normal journal, the one you're thinking of doesn't come into play until Rainbow Rocks
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What a tempting thought.
I saw a Zimbabwian Flame Lilly
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That's the flower I was looking at for inspiration when I wrote that part, so I'm glad you saw it
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To be fair the setting is so far from canon that it makes sense to have it.
BTW the greater good comes ftom the profesies recorded in the hall of profesies, many of wich would talk about the end of the wotld if or when muggles became aware of magic and started to use it.
Did they never thought of using cameras to see ehat is on the other side of the portal?
Off course they didn't...
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But she has it already, it was one of the items she took with her through the portal.
Makes sense that in her amnestic state she would think of it as a diary.
... Sorry, I forgor we are not following any canon.
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Why do all your coments have a downvote even when it is nothing much like this one?
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She is 10 in this story, so far.
Whay change would make names like Snowdrop Honey to be normal in our (hp) world from the 90's?