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Venomblast


You can cut yourself on my edge, and if not that, poisoned by my toxic personality.

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Edited by: TheMajorTechie

Cover Art by: LilyPadDoodles

“The Devourer glides through the realm on wings of ruin. In her wake, armies of fire and shadows emerge. She will drown those that stand against her in blood and kneel the world with smoke and ash. When all is barren, and even the browning plants have bowed—she will swallow the world.”


Two thousand years ago, before even the legends of old creased the mountains—existed a story. Within this story, were proud kingdoms. A changeling hive rested in the south, a fortress with galloping centaurs in the northeast, and a castle with a questioning Titan in the north.

This was the Titan’s story.

—But there were more kingdoms in this story. A humble palace was tucked away in the south-east, griffons wheeled around fang-white peaks in the mountains—and something malevolent would one day lurk in the south-west.

Many great walls stood in old Equestria, but that did not guarantee their longevity. They fell. Like fleeting sand on the shore, they were lost to seas of flames. Coeus the Titan warned them of Asmodeus. The creature that yearned for blood and anguish.

He warned them of its lust for war. Their hatred and clashing steel was the melody for its summon. It was what had birthed it. They didn’t listen. They commanded the Titan do their bidding, to decimate their foes, and Asmodeus heard it.

Now, they had loosed it into their realm. The fire and death the Titan was forced to cause came back ten-fold. The Devourer, Summoner of Sins, and Eater of Worlds…

…had declared hell empty. The demons now walked among mortals, and forever may she reign.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Am Tonkus. Is story editor. Read story or I take ur kneecaps. 👁👄👁👍

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What a nice way of encouraging people. XD Thanks for the support and editing, Tonkus. :rainbowlaugh:

Classic book spoilers. They were the best way to vex your sibling.

FOUL! Foul, I say! Well played, Coeus. That would certainly vex me or my sibling significantly.

I have never failed my father. It was almost as if I couldn't. Whatever he asked of me, it was done. Something about that…had always concerned me. Why couldn't I deny my father? Did I yearn for his favor that badly?

Oh. Oh, he didn't know? Was that mentioned before? Poor guy...

A raven flew into the open windows. It smacked into the walls, bare of drapes, and then collapsed onto the ground motionlessly. Tied to its back was a letter sealed in a cylinder container.

"—I pray that wasn’t our bird.”

Oh, it's not often that I must pause my reading to laugh. :rainbowlaugh:

I whistled. “Alright, I hear your grips. Gather by the fire and I’ll hover over your bowl.”

Gripes, methinks. They'd have to be gripping quite vigorously for it to be that audible, even to a being with senses as sharp as Coeus.

The fact that Pinkamena and Coeus have such a good sibling relationship makes everything I know to happen in the future so much worse! Why you gotta hurt me like this, Venom?

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Oh. Oh, he didn't know? Was that mentioned before? Poor guy...

Nope. He had no clue. He doesn't know about anything he mentioned in Chapter Six yet. Even worse, Pinkamena has no idea about ANY of the things her father is doing and still doesn't. That's why she called Coeus a liar.

Oh, it's not often that I must pause my reading to laugh.

Glad I got a laugh. :pinkiehappy:

Gripes, methinks.

Glares at TheMajorTechie. You had one job. Just kidding. Thanks for pointing that out, in longer chapters small little mistakes can still get through even with two people going through it.

The fact that Pinkamena and Coeus have such a good sibling relationship makes everything I know to happen in the future so much worse! Why you gotta hurt me like this, Venom?

Yeah, their relationship was pretty strong back then. This story really dives into what truly happened during the years Pinkamena "doesn't remember." Even though it is mentioned throughout A Demon's Loss is a Mortal's Gain, I wanted to write a story to really elaborate on what happened. How terrible the war was for Equestria and the ultimate betrayal between the two. I started Chapter One with the "event" that started it all, and now we are working our way to it. Thanks for your feedback, really helps me understand what stuck out. Hope you enjoy Chapter Two!

Garette is officially a bro. Getting him a break on technicalities, nice work.

...wow, he needed that break. At least I know he wasn't lying in the other story now... I wonder, will his shackles ever be shattered?

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