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Jonathan and his five friends all have one thing in common. They all love the show My Little Pony Friendship is Magic, but one day they each have a similar dream of the mane six battling for survival in a strange world. Johnathan soon wakes up in a world that's not earth or Equestria but somewhere in between. Johnathan learns that 100 ponies have been selected to battle for the right to ascend as the new prince or princess of Equestria. Armed with a single blue book Johnathan fights alongside Rainbow Dash and his friends to put an end to the conflict and discover the mysteries of it's origins.

A new spin on the whole "Human in Equestria" story. A tale about friendship despite the hardships of battle and war. A crossover as well with Zatch Bell! in terms of setting and situation. I hope this will provide you with something interesting and unique to this genre of Fan Fic.

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Comments ( 23 )

Hmm... A Zatch Bell crossover. Interesting premise.

i've gotta say i have honestly never even heard of a Zatch Bell crossover for MLP. i'm gonna keep an eye on this.

Excellent concept. I literally read this and was like "darn, why didn't I think if that?" Mamoto battles with ponies? I applaud you.

However, I think you're gonna need an editor bro. I'd hate to see this get overlooked because of the tiny grammatical errors and awkward phrasing here and there.

DARN YOU! You've lured me in with the promise of Zatch.

1251005:flutterrage:YOU GOT SOME EXPLAINING TO DO JONATHAN DEREKSON!!:flutterrage: very last minute but still funny as hell

1447048I'm making up my own spells to differentiate from the series. I'm using the basic idea of Zatch Bell not absolutely everything about it

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I was wondering on some parts like "Kiyo accidentally says Zatch's spells,""Zatch having amnesia." :trixieshiftright:

1447183I will make references to the series and I just felt it would be fitting if Johnathan discovered the spells in the same fashion Kiyo did. As for the amnesia thing it isn't just Rainbow that has it, all the ponies have some levels of amnesia to withhold information about the fight

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So they all don't know what they're fighting for? :trixieshiftleft: They know about humans, magic books, their whole life in equestria, but their ultimate goal? :trixieshiftright:

1447350Some do some don't, the levels of amnesia very from pony to pony....okay will you stop questioning the plot when I only have one chapter up!

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Well...sorry for being little curious about my two of my fav shows being merged together like this...

1447403Sorry didn't mean to shout...I only really came up with this idea in my head one day and I didn't expect there to be so much to think about

1447403Listen I really am sorry, you had some legitimate questions to ask and I lashed out at you...can I ask your forgiveness?

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Its cool :moustache:, I thought that way too when I made my first story recently, and being on youtube a lot made me come across Zatch Bell again. It got me thinking again if there was a crossover of it here on Fimfic :pinkiesmile: only thing that got me though is the spells meanings.

Like "Rainden" the Rain part made me think of actual weather water. I could help with the spells sound cooler...if yah want to

1447648"Rainden" sounded like "Raiden" which means Lightning in japanese. That's why I picked it, although when I do eventually fix this I would like to hear some spell and spell name ideas from a fan :pinkiehappy:

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I'm no editor or anything, but when comes zatch bell spells, I can help :ajsmug:
Just PM me if yah need help with the Mamodo and spellbook concept thing :rainbowdetermined2:

I wonder when they'll meet up with the rest of the main 6...

I like this story, I hope you'll continue it. :twilightsmile:

2220575As of current this story is on hiatus pending a big re write that probably won't come out until my main series get's it's finale. So don't expect an update until like may or something.

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