Acmos
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This is great!
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to see what you do next
Good work 👍
Wow i barley even know what's happening, and that's saying a lot.
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Eh?)
Thought Sweetie Belle was wearing a pacifier in that cover at first.
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I'm sorry? Didnt undestand... Is there an auto-translator error somewhere that gives the sentence a false meaning?
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What are you talking about?
10867161
Heh, sorry, i just cant understand your first comment. i know english, but not enough for free talking, and google translate of your comment was... strange.
10867166
It was already in English. I said I had thought Sweetie Belle had a pacifier in the cover art of the story, but then I realized it was a teacup.
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Well, now i undestand you really good) Anyway, sorry for bothering u
10867172
It’s all good. 👍🏻
might be a good idea to find an editor to help you out with this, not sure how to describe it exactly, but reading it almost feels... stunted maybe? not sure what the exact word is...
Why did you make the chapters so long?
10866923
The English is bad it doesn't make any sense i get a vague idea of what's going on but it just doesn't make any sense.
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Of course it’s bad, it’s Google translate feature
Definately could use some editing, but besides that, you made a good reflection of the CMC on how they would act
М-да... Гугл реально изнасиловал текст. Читать давольно тяжело.
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Оригинал тут если что, он нормальный) https://ficbook.net/readfic/9231297
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О, это тема! Гляну.
I can say that this story is definitely worthy of the reader's attention! And as for the corrections made to the text, all this will certainly be.
But one thing I definitely wish for this story: Live and make others happy!
This is extremely tiresome to read and try to make sense of.
Damn. Kruto
I'm really liking this story! I'm kinda mad that it stopped at such a critical moment, but the hell can I do?
I had fun trying to decipher the dialog and descriptions in their google translate english glory!
10877430
I couldn't agree more. I'm a university graduate and I also have an extremely good vocabulary from being an avid bibliophile, and even I have trouble following what's going on in this story. Its full of so many doctorate level words that following what's going on takes a lot of time.
I encourage the Translator to study the writing of Ernest Hemingway. Hemingway was one of the greatest writers of the 20th century.
Here is a clip from an analysis of Hemingway style.
Full Article Here
Hemingway was once challenged to write an entire, complete story in one short sentence. He did it in 6 words.
This was translated from Russian, and I get the feeling that it was translated by a University Professor of Classic English Literature. The kind that always wears a red smoking jacket and the fingerless gloves and stays in the gloomiest parts of the rare books' section of the university library restricted section.
😎
The Monk
Don't get me wrong, this is not a bad story, and I very much want to see much more from this Author.
The Authors writing style reminds me of H.P. Lovecraft in many ways. But even Lovecraft kept his word choices mid-tier and mostly common use.
The Monk
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This story is not yet fully translated by a human, as it was mostly done by Google Translate (~75% of it). But there is a probability that all the next chapters will be converted to English manually, as Acmos has not yet posted here two that came out in Russian this week.
I feel you should make the chapters slightly shorter. Through a little over half of it I started to kinda skim over things cause it was getting bothersomely long. Other then that so far interesting story.
10877430
I agree pretty sure I said something along the same lines last chapter just phrased differently.
I am confused now Alex is villain now sorta turned to a dark fic
11007831
Wait for next chapter) Friendship is magic, imbalanced thing.
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Ok looking forward to it
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OK so I wasnt the only one who started doing that.
Interesting
It was amazing, watching Mercer bluff his way through that meeting as General Grebious. He even made himself look like a Kaleesh warrior.
Kudos
Is this dropped?