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awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
Breast Sizes?
Wait. Why is this section in the first person?
I think the loincloth is supposed to be under the exposed midriff. Also, this section is in the present tense. Aren't you writing this story in the past tense?
The highlighted lines are in the present tense here.
Isn't amethyst technically a gem? What's the difference?
"Starting" may be redundant here.
Yeesh. I hope she didn't paralyse him.😰
There's some repetition here.
DId you mean, "or"?
nice work look forward to more on this and my top3 faves
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Unfortunately he has a habit of rushing out his stories without properly reading it. He even repeats the same thing after every paragraph
What original series is this a spin off from?
We all have but one choice we must take the long dark Road of Moria be on your guard there older thing than Orcs in the Deep places of the world drums drums in the Deep
Nice, can’t wait for more!
Well it looks like someone is going to ruin their marriage. She is going to try to justify it anyway she can. Like any husband would be happy to hear that his little brother has slept and possibly knocked up their wife after their wife almost killed them. Oh yea I am sure Shining will be totally cool with this.
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Gotta go fast!
I love lore and I'm always happy to lend a hand at worldbuilding.
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Cute....
You probably need to get permission from his girlfriend first (if he has any).
Nice story, and where you get that cover art from?
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Found it online by typing Succubus Tattoo
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Alright, cool. Design looks awesome.
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No answer yet.
Okay, this author seems to write amazing stories, then abandon them when they seem to get good. Not an insult, just an observation. But still, I can't wait to see more of this, and other stories I've read by this author if they decide to continue this.
Hey SonicBlitz18, just checking. When is this story going to be updated again? Other readers and I really want to see what you are going to do with it.
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I wouldn't say abandon. Just very large gaps between updates
Any chance of you returning to this story sometime?
Would love to read more chapters!