A Friendly Discovery
"What is it?" It sat there in confusion at my sudden expression.
"James?!?" It then shared my expression
"Wait! How do you know my name?"
It hit me when he said 'bad accident' and 'a few days ago', he must've been sent to equestria after his accident too, why though? I sort of figured with my love for equestria why I'm here, but why him? Who cares, I'm here now and I can help him learn equestria.
"Its... it's me James, its Matthew" His expression became even more surprised than mine.
He came closer, "Matthew?! Is- is that really you?"
"The one and only" He then immediately jumped onto me and gave me a hug.
"Oh my gosh! I can't believe it's really you!"
"I thought I was all alone out here, then of all the people to show up, it was the only one who knows about this place!"
"Its called equestria, right? I figured that when I saw a pony, then it turns out it was my best buddy!"
He hugged tighter as he was filled with joy and relief. "Hey, not so tight! You still got claws you know" I laughed a bit as I was getting just the slightest bit strangled by James.
"Oh! Sorry" He quickly got up on his paws. As I got up on my hooves, I wrapped one around his neck and gave him a quick little hug back.
"Its good to see you again James" As I let go of him.
"Me too, soooo. Anyways, what was that thing you said I was again?" Oh, right,
"A Changeling, a creature that can change their form to almost any other creature they desire"
"Ok, cool. But, how do I change back?" Oh... right
"Hmm, I'm not entirely sure about that, but from what you said earlier, it seems you've got to focus on a creature's looks and details, why don't you try it on me"
He was a bit sceptical at first but he just nodded "Um, ok then" He looked at me for a bit then he closed his eyes. After a few seconds, he was surrounded in a quick flash of green light and then he looked just like me!
I let out a quick gasp which also helped him know he'd done something and opened his eyes. "You did it James!"
He looked back at himself, then back to me. I also noticed I must also have purple eyes. "Wow, I... I actually did it, amazing!"
His face lit up with excitement. "I know right, now I have an idea..."
"Yes?"
"Try to go through the same thought process, but instead of thinking of me or another creature, try to make it all blank, I feel like that might be able to change you to your original changeling form or we'll just have to find some help elsewhere"
"I suppose I'll give it a shot" He closed his eyes once again. I didn't know if my long shot of an idea would work, but then... another surrounding flash of green light.
"It worked James!" It worked, he was a changeling, a cyan, yellow eyed changeling.
"Oh and I also forgot to mention, a changeling's normal form have wings too" He looked back at himself again.
"Wow! I cant believe it worked!"
I sat down as James continued to look at his true, colourful form. Then I remembered my own wings. I stood up as I had a good look at them, I tried to move them thinking I couldn't, being new to this body. But to my surprise, I could, it just felt like a second pair of arms on my back, just a bit lighter and a completely different shape. James looked over at me and noticed me examining my now open wings. "Wow, your wings are nice"
He stood in awe at my wings, I gently closed them back up.
"So are a changeling's, but I'm pretty sure changeling wings are a bit different from Pony wings, they're more bug like and I don't know if they flap just like a pony's."
"More like, flutter I guess, take a ladybug for example. You also have a bit of a protective shell over your wings that shift out of the way a bit when you open them, so yeah, kind of like a ladybug I suppose."
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10847458
No problem! Glad you took it well! You just need a tiny push in the right direction, why not help a little?
I'm loving this fic! I can't wait to see what your story has to offer!
Wanna know a harsh truth about this fic anyone? I already what you gonna write in the future, author. (Of course after 3 chapters short like hell)
P/S if you care, Author. Please respond
10849353
What do ya want me too say huh? (I well and truly dont know)
*oh look! A time traveler, they know how my story's gonna go* yea if its predictable to you I dont really care to much. This has kinda been my little "passion project" I've had in the back of my day to day life for a while and I could've never shared it, but I did.
So, whatever.
I ain't the best of writers but if ya dont like that then go find someone who rights longer stories.
10850542
okay.... wanna some advice? At least you the one who will listen, right? Don't worry this will friendly advice. Since you are a newbie in writing, I can see what mistakes the new ones usually make.
10850559
I suppose I'll listen.
no promises, though it is my story and I'll write it how I like, whether there be people who judge or not
10850574
Promise me that you don't delete the comment and put it there.
P/S: I'm still waiting here and sorry for late because I am writing my story.
10850583
I'd only delete any comment if I see toxicity or hate speech, so I think you'd be fine
10850587
Okay. Let me say the first thing: Please avoid that Black and Red OC. The black and Red OC will make viewers feel that like " oh, this OC is so edgy. I will read another story."
P/S: can you tell me why you like Black and Red OC?
10850603
More gray than black imo. Crimson is my only oc with a "black" and red color scheme. I dont have like 10 different black and red ocs. Let them think what they want about my character, and I dont get why someone would instantly click off due to them assuming said character is edgy.
Plus I had assumed said advice was going to be more oriented around my writing, not the color scheme of a character.
10850608
You know edgy can make the story will be bad right? Except you write a mystery or horror story, you can use that. Other types, please use it at the right time, Not in OC. Readers ignore your story immediately when seeing your OC, how can you better when everyone not wanna see your story?
P/S Gray and Black nearly the same, not better. Like I click "Like" and It doesn't show the ratio. you can use that OC in making comics, not in writing. In writing, colour make feeling, not like the act
10850603
I dont have a thing for black and red characters/ocs. Crimson is more of my sona, and my process of making him was due to my love of night, so he's a bat pony, and I some reason have an interest in the word crimson, so he has a red mane, I wanted to do a black coat to go with night but I sorta know the dark/pure black and red characters = edgy/evil (from a general public perspective) so I made his coat a bit more gray. I also do quite like black/gray and red colors in general (and no, not at all because I like edgy/evil). I apologize if my creative spark to make an oc (my first oc to be specific) didnt make it in a color scheme you like
10850616
I'll use my character's how I like thank you. Now can you please go away if you are going to continue about said characters colors and nothing else
10850617
Wow, you keep that OC? okay now let start about the writing. I got two words "Too fast"
10850625
Neat, and?
10850629
And it not good in general. And you know when I say "too fast" that mean it lack of detail.
10850630
And there we have it
Could you please take your leave I would like no more in this
10850631
Say the one who will listen criticism. Let me guess, your OC is going to meet the main 6 and be along with them like 10 second right?