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The Rise of Harmony Princess - Shadow-Iris



After a problem in the Royal Wedding, Twilight was abandoned from Equestria and had to made a choice to survive whether she wanted or not

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Chapter 2

Author's Note:

This chapter was made from the idea that TwilightSparkleRocks told me

Thank you so much for your idea :scootangel: and hope you all enjoy this chapter. Please tell me if you see any part of the chapter that seems off

After putting a sleeping spell on Twilight, the Sun Princess was embarrassed and disappointed for her student’s action. That was her old foal sitter who she spent a lot of time with in her childhood, and now the unicorn dared to shout and nearly attacked the Love Alicorn without any proof, that was unacceptable. Was the unicorn just behaved in the past just because of her mentor?. She wasn't sure but she knew after this, she needed to talk with her. But for now, she should stop her from attending the wedding for the safety of her niece.

Stepping into her student room, the Princess surprised at Twilight's abrupt disappearance. ‘What? I just left her here for a while and now she was gone. I should find her before she makes any trouble’. The Solar monarch quickly ran out of the room only to find the bearers in front of the room.

“Did you see Twilight? She disappeared after I left the room.”

“No, yer highness, we haven’t seen her anywhere. Right, Sugarcubes?.”

“Yes, Princess, we haven’t found her while we are around the castle. Maybe she just woke up and left a while ago, or someone brought her somewhere else?.”

”Nopony except me could enter this room without Twilight's permission. This is her room since she started studying with me and if she left the castle, the guard would have informed me a while ago. It's ok if you all don't know about her I will ask Cadance if she has any ideas about where Twilight is."

The bearers decided to follow the monarch to find their friend, the group headed over to Cadance's room to meet the princess. But when they entered, the princess wasn't there but a black creature covered by chitin who match Celestia's height.

"Who are you? What are you doing here? Where is the princess" Asked Rainbow Dash?

"I'm Chrysalis, queen of the Changelings, I am here to conquer this 'little' kingdom. And about Cadance" The queen turned to the familiar pink Alicorn and laughed "The Cadance you met with these past three days was me this whole time. And you fools never noticed it except Twilight Sparkle, whom you all wanted to punish for what she did at the rehearsal when she was right all along." She mocked and dropped her disguise again.

"What have you done to my friend" shouted the blue pegasus angrily as the other gasped.

"Oh, that sweet unicorn?~” said Chrysalis meekly as she continued ”She wasn't here anymore, from what I hear. And that was all your fault."

"Why was it our fault? We haven't even done anything to her" asked Rarity as the other nodded except Fluttershy who shied away when she remembered their mistakes

"You don't remember? Let me remind you. You didn't believe her words although she was closer to you only to believe mine, a stranger you hadn't met before. If I was you, I would treat her better" mocked the queen again "That unicorn was unlucky to have you as friends and mentor" The ponies hid their heads in shame.

"Luckily for me and thank to you fools, my plan will succeed and she will be mine, soon."

"What do you want to do with her?" asked Celestia.

"You found your voice again, huh princess. I thought you would feel shame about your action. Your student may have run away from this terrible kingdom so you can't apologize to her," Answered Chrysalis in a satisfied voice "And to answer your question, I found her ... interesting and attractive. She was the one who found out that I was fake anyway, so I want her to be my equal~"

"Y-You won't get away with it. Twilight will never love a monster like you."

"But I already have, my changelings had prepared and with the Royal guard captain under my control. Equestria will be mine and you can't stop me."

"You're wrong, without Twilight, I can still defeat you" The Solar Princess flew up and fired a beam only to be pushed back by the queen's magic until she hit the floor with her horn injured by the spell affection.

"Your magic is useless against me now. Thanks to Shining Armor's love for Cadance I've been feeding off of, my power increased a lot. I will get what I want soon" laughed Chrysalis evilly.

"You can't get what you want. Twilight will be back and free us soon."

"You think so? After what you just did to her, you still think she will save you? There is a little chance she'll be back, but there is an even smaller chance she will rescue you considering that she felt betrayed by you all. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if she doesn't befriend any of you ever again after this."

"Even without Twilight, we will defeat you" Said the five ponies.

"You're so naive, without the Element, you think that you will win? You don't believe me? Fine, I will show you how useless you are without your friend."

The queen fired a magic beam into the group, with Twilight ran away, but they couldn't use magic except for Rarity, who called a shield. But the magic between a normal unicorn and a queen so different, the shield soon shattered and hit the bearers. They hit the wall and lost their consciousness. 'This was even easier than I thought.'

In a flash of magic, she teleported the five mortal ponies to the Canterlot's dungeon and the princess to her room, bounded by changing's slime to prevent her escape. She would make a deal to her later, now all she had to do was finding a reason to keep them there. 'Maybe I should tell the jailer to keep them there until my plan success.'

Putting back her disguise, she was the pink Alicorn again. Walking over the dungeon, she used her magic to send her message back to the hive. Which was finding Twilight and ready to attack the kingdom capital tomorrow. The fake Cadance entered the prison only to find the ponies she just teleported here yelled at the jailer, they shouted angrily and demanded him to let them go.

"You shouldn't let them go, they tried to attack me and I had to teleport them here to avoid more injuries. I'm here to warn you about their sudden appearance in this prison, please take care of them for me" Said 'Cadance', who acted like she was injured after the mortal's bearers' attack.

"Yes, princess. I won't let them escape."

The love alicorn nodded, exiting the dungeon and heading back to her room to make a deal with the ruler of Equus. Years of conquering had made the queen became more cautious about the other ruler. They may break the deal when they were free again. But she was sure of Celestia, the ruler seems to love her ponies than anything. Now she had won and could do anything she wants, but that didn't mean the ponies will follow her. By dealing with the princess, which she would treat her ponies better if she passed her throne over her, she would fully overthrow the princess without any threat but also made sure that the princess won't do anything to save her subject.

Walking into the room, the queen realized that the monarch already woke up. Putting a silence spell, she started.

"I'm here to make a deal with you, it is about your subject..."

Comments ( 22 )

Great chapter.

"You found your voice again, huh princess. I thought you would feel shame about your action. Your student may run away from this terrible kingdom so you can't apologize to her," Answered Chrysalis in a satisfied voice "And to answer your question, I found her ... interesting and attractive. She was the one who found out that I was fake anyway, so I want her to be my equal~"

Your student may have run away

Interesting turn of events to be sure

"You think so? After what you just did to her, you still think she will save you? There is a little chance she will be back but there even a smaller chance she will able to rescue you."

There is a little chance she'll be back, but there is an even smaller chance she will rescue you considering that she felt betrayed by you all. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if she doesn't befriend any of you ever again after this.

"I'm Chrysalis, queen of the Changeling, I am here to conquer this 'little' kingdom. And about Cadance" The queen turned to the familiar pink Alicorn and laughed "The one you met in three days was me all the time but you didn't realize it except your friend" She mocked and dropped her disguise again.

The Cadance you met with these past three days was me this whole time. And you fools never noticed it except Twilight Sparkle, whom you all wanted to punish for what she did at the rehearsal when she was right all along.

“Yes, Princess, we haven’t found her while we are around the castle. Maybe she just woke up and leave a while ago or someone brought her somewhere else?.”

Maybe she woke up and left a while ago, or somepony brought her somewhere else?

"Your magic is useless for me now, thank Shining Armor's love for Cadance, my power increased a lot. I'll get what I want soon" Laughed Chrysalis evilly.

Your magic is useless against me now. Thanks to Shining Armor's love for Cadance I've been feeding off of, my power increased a lot. I will get what I want soon.

"Why it was our fault? We haven't do anything to her" Asked Rarity as the other nodded except Fluttershy who shied away when she remembered their mistakes

Why was it our fault? We haven't even done anything to her.

You have so many grammar errors in here. And the first letter of actions in dialogue (asked for example) should never, ever be capitalized.

After putting a sleep spell on Twilight, the Sun Princess was embarrassed and disappointed for her student’s action. That was her old foal sitter who she spent a lot of time with in her childhood, and now the unicorn dared to shout and nearly attacked the Love Alicorn without any proof, that was unacceptable. Was the unicorn just behaved in the past just because of her mentor?. She wasn't sure but she knew after this, she needed to talk with her. But for now, she should stop her from attending the wedding for the safety of her niece.

sleeping spell

Do not capitalize the starting letter of something like laughed, said, etc. And put the correct ending punctuation, a coma(,) after said, a period(.) after anything that's not said, same for an exclamation point(!).

"I'm Chrysalis, queen of the Changeling, I am here to conquer this 'little' kingdom. And about Cadance" The queen turned to the familiar pink Alicorn and laughed "The Cadance you met with these past three days was me this whole time. And you fools never noticed it except Twilight Sparkle, whom you all wanted to punish for what she did at the rehearsal when she was right all along." She mocked and dropped her disguise again.

Changelings is spelled wrong.

"You're so naive, without the Element, you think that you will win? You don't believe me? Fine, I will show you how useless you are without your friend."

without the bearer of the Element of Magic

Ok so I just started reading it, and it seems ok from the start and now... keep up the good work! The story seems intresting!

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Are you gonna continue this story? I would be eternally grateful if you did.

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Yes, I do. But I think I’ll write the chapter next week because I just had some extra classes I need to deal with.

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Are you gonna continue this? It's already the middle of September.

Story is good, but the grammar could use a little work. Going to continue this? I'd like to see where it's going.

When will there be a continuation

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Honestly, I'm not really sure. My school started too late and very rushing right now so I mostly don't have motivation to do. But I may have a chance to continue on Christmas if my motivation getting better.

Then good luck with your studies.

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plz update ... im going to bookmark this

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I can't sadly. I am busy with my study right now with 1st semester test-which I thought would end before Dec so I can write but it was hiatus till Jan, and online classes killed me. And the main reason I didnt write anymore because I'm kinda not interested in MLP anymore. But the other story are on hiatus so I'll need to read this again before thinking about continue this. It had been awhile and I had changed to Dreamtale so I spent most time reading than writing.

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