10903699 10903702 I was too. Helped me that I found some good music and watched/read anime, manga, manwha, and korean/chinese cartoons with good fighting scenes.
10904153 Maybe... Would you readers feel like Pill Crafting is a legitimate option in the MLP: FIM universe? I mean potion crafting is a thing but I am unsure how to work in pill crafting since I am unsure how to work in the ingredients since those the kirin spirits and Guo Long knows come from his first isekai world. Not this one.
he might be wise and was well trained in his old body but now he has a new ine with new limits and is less knolagable about it so it makes sense he wouldnet win overwelmingly and insted had a bit of troble
=speaks jokingly in a stereotypical Russian accent way=
No to pill craft here pls, thiz iz fine as iz I am very pleased for the ripping and tearing of evildoers. Da Very good combat. Yes Now comrade, onto the next chapter we see perhaps the MC is recovering once more and has saved the village from bandits, what comes next I leave that to you bosmeng. Da
Hope I didn't spoil too much heh heh, but I certainly think the good and awesome Bosmeng, the author, deserves another shore leave come on agree with me here comment section although some of you seems to be impatient and rude...
The author now certainly needs to sort out how things would go from here I had faith from the start of this story that Guo Long would eventually use an attack like the Monster Hunter World ThunderHorse. Sigh what else could I say.
10907088 Pill crafting could create some interesting interactions. Let's leave out the fact that it's present in 90%+ of wuxia and purely assess its merits in this particular story.
Firstly, and most humorous, you could have it differ widely from potions (let's call pill crafting alchemy, for now). Maybe potions are made in a way that the ingredients used compound off each other to drastically different effects, which would legitimize why Zecroa had seeds to a plant, she had Applebloom eat whole instead of concocting a potion with a higher concentration using the plant.
Potion brewing could follow bad fantasy tropes and have seemingly random ingredients added to make a potion for a specific effect. "Twilight, why are you mixing a sedative with a laxative?" "Because, I need bug repellent."
This could lead Twilight to be beyond nerdy, while she tries to figure out how it's done. Alchemy might be able to differ, due to it separating and concentration the essence from the materials used into their purest form and achieving better results, instead of going through several processes to refine the necessary concoction. "One-and-Done".
Secondly, it would allow both worldbuilding and character development opportunities with Hardshell. Maybe he knows enough about medicine to lead MC to useful materials that could be used as is, but not enough to refine them into complex medicines.
Maybe Guo Long teaches him the most basic alchemy, which skyrockets the quality of medicine the village has access to, without tying himself down to the location. This could also be used as grounds for a royal interest in the area, which would lead to Guo Long to the Empyreal courts, for good and ill.
Guo Long's knowledge, talent, and skills could lead the Emperor to want to try to take him into his faction. Or, his unknown origins and demeanor could paint him as a threat to the Emperors rule. "Capable AND humble? You're hiding something, other than your identity."
Both of these options could, realistically, have Guo Long travel to Equestria. Either as an ambassador or a refugee, which, in turn, could easily draw Celestias eye.
10907541 Fixed the sexual evasion to physical evasion. Thank you for the notification, since my spelling aid cannot seem to realize what words are appropriate. And thank you for the comment, yeah Grubber died. But he will always be remembered whenever we smell the sweet scent of roasted bacon.
10907706 Thank you for your opinion, I have made a blogpost for the voting on pill making in the story. I am glad you found the combat enjoyable and thank you for the suggestions.
10908134 10908171 *Sips a cup of juice* I personally cannot figure out how to write like that so I ain't going to comment.
10908399 I like all of this. I have made a blog post about this. Go and vote and give your input. For I need feedback from readers, along with yes, no, or other, votes before I decide.
In Feng Shui, there is Water, Wood, Fire, Earth, and Metal. They represent the physical and mental energies of your surroundings. It is not totally the same as the feng shui of earth. It is a specific form of nature-based qi that can be utilized to create formations, rituals, training grounds, and so on. In truth, there are more elements to this, but producing them requires supernatural effects on the world or an area with extreme weather conditions.
This gave me a terrible flashback of "amazing cultivation simulator", getting a suitable training area for your type of training is very annoying.
I wish it had "Pill Crafting", maybe traveling with a zebra if it's not too cliché or finding a herbalist manual and then trial and error.
10908781 Yeah. I am a GM/DM for two different roleplaying groups. I am a bit hardened at bad jokes by now. Sorry.
10908864 I will introduce some pill crafting and some potion crafting, making Guo Long capable of both but not be a master of them. And yeah, that game is what inspired most of the wushu/wuxian related stuff in the story. Only a lot less complicated.
10913372 ...Okay. This is a bit confusing and not to mention the repeating lyrics are very annoying. Not my first pick, it sounds like the first couple of seconds of a song and they forgot to add the rest and just made the entire song into a remix of that part.
10920472 Some. Nothing too advanced, I will be showing scenes where Guo Logn tries to control his breathing during training and combat to lessen fatigue and to improve his qi control. Proper breathing techniques play a big role in martial arts and training regularly. So Guo Long will have such techniques, though he is not yet able to use them subconsciously. I might make a technique that involves qi that can be used as a sort of booster or fighting technique, but not yet. For now, it is basic breathing techniques with basic applications.
10886454
Eeeeeeeh. Maybe if I find a fitting scene.
10886550
Nice options. Helped me find the ninja version of megalovania.
10886585
The chakrams are kind of built for that. But I know what kind of flight you are talking about.
10886707
No worries, I found some.
10899504
Here's more content. Enjoy.
10903699
10903702
I was too. Helped me that I found some good music and watched/read anime, manga, manwha, and korean/chinese cartoons with good fighting scenes.
10904153
Maybe... Would you readers feel like Pill Crafting is a legitimate option in the MLP: FIM universe? I mean potion crafting is a thing but I am unsure how to work in pill crafting since I am unsure how to work in the ingredients since those the kirin spirits and Guo Long knows come from his first isekai world. Not this one.
he might be wise and was well trained in his old body but now he has a new ine with new limits and is less knolagable about it so it makes sense he wouldnet win overwelmingly and insted had a bit of troble
This is really well done mate
While i saw some errors here and there, this one takes the cake
No idea as to how the logistics of such a move would work, but i suppose he knows more of fighting than i
But anyway... Damn fine chapter. Shame that Grubber died. He seemed interesting. Was sort of hoping to see him teach a few tips and tricks to Guo Long
=speaks jokingly in a stereotypical Russian accent way=
No to pill craft here pls, thiz iz fine as iz
I am very pleased for the ripping and tearing of evildoers. Da
Very good combat. Yes
Now comrade, onto the next chapter we see perhaps the MC is recovering once more and has saved the village from bandits, what comes next I leave that to you bosmeng. Da
Hope I didn't spoil too much heh heh, but I certainly think the good and awesome Bosmeng, the author, deserves another shore leave come on agree with me here comment section although some of you seems to be impatient and rude...
The author now certainly needs to sort out how things would go from here I had faith from the start of this story that Guo Long would eventually use an attack like the Monster Hunter World ThunderHorse. Sigh what else could I say.
OK that was epic! I like this story so far and can't wait to see how this turns out
10907088
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10908134
for those who are having a bit of trouble it says "at last" apologies to those who don't speak psuedo-demonic.
10907088
Pill crafting could create some interesting interactions.
Let's leave out the fact that it's present in 90%+ of wuxia and purely assess its merits in this particular story.
Firstly, and most humorous, you could have it differ widely from potions (let's call pill crafting alchemy, for now). Maybe potions are made in a way that the ingredients used compound off each other to drastically different effects, which would legitimize why Zecroa had seeds to a plant, she had Applebloom eat whole instead of concocting a potion with a higher concentration using the plant.
Potion brewing could follow bad fantasy tropes and have seemingly random ingredients added to make a potion for a specific effect.
"Twilight, why are you mixing a sedative with a laxative?" "Because, I need bug repellent."
This could lead Twilight to be beyond nerdy, while she tries to figure out how it's done. Alchemy might be able to differ, due to it separating and concentration the essence from the materials used into their purest form and achieving better results, instead of going through several processes to refine the necessary concoction. "One-and-Done".
Secondly, it would allow both worldbuilding and character development opportunities with Hardshell. Maybe he knows enough about medicine to lead MC to useful materials that could be used as is, but not enough to refine them into complex medicines.
Maybe Guo Long teaches him the most basic alchemy, which skyrockets the quality of medicine the village has access to, without tying himself down to the location. This could also be used as grounds for a royal interest in the area, which would lead to Guo Long to the Empyreal courts, for good and ill.
Guo Long's knowledge, talent, and skills could lead the Emperor to want to try to take him into his faction. Or, his unknown origins and demeanor could paint him as a threat to the Emperors rule. "Capable AND humble? You're hiding something, other than your identity."
Both of these options could, realistically, have Guo Long travel to Equestria. Either as an ambassador or a refugee, which, in turn, could easily draw Celestias eye.
Blog Post about Pill Making Vote Open: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/957312/pill-alchemy-yes-no-other
10907434
I thank you for agreeing with my reasoning why Guo Long is not OP, thank you for the comment.
10907446
Thank you.
10907541
Fixed the sexual evasion to physical evasion. Thank you for the notification, since my spelling aid cannot seem to realize what words are appropriate. And thank you for the comment, yeah Grubber died. But he will always be remembered whenever we smell the sweet scent of roasted bacon.
10907706
Thank you for your opinion, I have made a blogpost for the voting on pill making in the story. I am glad you found the combat enjoyable and thank you for the suggestions.
10907754
Glad you're enjoying it thus far.
10908134
10908171
*Sips a cup of juice* I personally cannot figure out how to write like that so I ain't going to comment.
10908399
I like all of this. I have made a blog post about this. Go and vote and give your input. For I need feedback from readers, along with yes, no, or other, votes before I decide.
10908770
Really?...
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This gave me a terrible flashback of "amazing cultivation simulator", getting a suitable training area for your type of training is very annoying.
I wish it had "Pill Crafting", maybe traveling with a zebra if it's not too cliché or finding a herbalist manual and then trial and error.
10908770
Are you going to do breathing techniques?
10908781
Yeah. I am a GM/DM for two different roleplaying groups. I am a bit hardened at bad jokes by now. Sorry.
10908864
I will introduce some pill crafting and some potion crafting, making Guo Long capable of both but not be a master of them. And yeah, that game is what inspired most of the wushu/wuxian related stuff in the story. Only a lot less complicated.
10913372
...Okay. This is a bit confusing and not to mention the repeating lyrics are very annoying. Not my first pick, it sounds like the first couple of seconds of a song and they forgot to add the rest and just made the entire song into a remix of that part.
10920472
Some. Nothing too advanced, I will be showing scenes where Guo Logn tries to control his breathing during training and combat to lessen fatigue and to improve his qi control. Proper breathing techniques play a big role in martial arts and training regularly. So Guo Long will have such techniques, though he is not yet able to use them subconsciously. I might make a technique that involves qi that can be used as a sort of booster or fighting technique, but not yet. For now, it is basic breathing techniques with basic applications.
10920626
If you ever seen American dad you will know who that is
10920626
Amazing bloody batlle