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Featherweight is done with school. He is done with Diamond Tiara and he is done with Silver Spoon. They constantly bully him for having so short wings and large ears. He needs someone to comfort him, someone who can talk him through it, and what he needs most... Is a friend. These qualities connect to a certain Princess of the Night.


Tis a submission to the Official May 2021 Pairing Contest.

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This story is so... Beautiful.

Featherweight's struggles are relatable for the teenager going through bullying. And what you did with Luna and Featherweight is amazing, Luna sympathizes with Featherweight's thoughts of suicide. The fact that Luna tried to commit suicide gives me Bruce Banner vibes. Good story.

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It's nice that you love this story, I appreciate you appreciating it.

Wow, this is very sad

Very nice story, bittersweet can be good sometimes.

That ending too, HILARIOUS

I GET THAT ENDING REFERENCE!

The_Chill_Author

The ending was awesome! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
It’s good to see DT finally getting what she deserves.
Well done, my friend! I approve!

Can I just say I am charmed that your wrote the moral of the story at the end?

No wondering. Though the themes were apprantent. Its still nice to see utter transperancy in a work of fiction.

Great job!

Loved the end.

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Thank you, both of you, for enjoying my story. :)

This was a very good one-shot. I was bullied too but not that bad that I wanted to kill myself.

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Thank you for the appreciation.

"I'll repeat what I said since even with such big ears you couldn't hear me," Diamond Tiara spat, I flinched at the harshness in her voice. "You will never be able to fly, with such a big head filled with worthless knowledge and your big ears, you can never fly. Short wings." Cheerilee walked out of class to talk to Applejack and as soon as I wasn't protected. They bully me.

"Oooh, you got roasted!" Snips said, making my already bad mood worse than it already is and fueling fire to the flames.

It’s funny how the same people that say these are the same people who are surprised when a suicide or school shooting happens.

"DO NOT LIE TO US, COLT!!!" Luna roared in her Royal Canterlot voice, I then let out an audible 'Eep!' before ducking to hide myself. Luna then realized what she said and looks down to me, "We apologize, we only wish to know why we feel the aura of death around thou."

God damn.

"I'm here to tell you about something on your face." I told the Unicorn, Diamond Tiara then checks her face with her hooves.

"What is it?" Diamond Tiara asked me, I then deck her in her face with the hardest buck I could muster.

"IT WAS PAIN!!!"

Is it bad that I screamed yes out loud when this happened?

So why is Diamond a unicorn here?

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I think it probably was a typo or error, could you show me where you found it?

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It was down at the end.

"I'm here to tell you about something on your face." I told the Unicorn, Diamond Tiara then checks her face with her hooves.

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