Taking place a week after Sunset's memories returned, the CMC and Flash find themselves face to face with non other than Sunset whose set up a meeting with the four to discuss the event's that have occurred and the outcome of it all and how it impacted not only her but the four of em as well.
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While you did better in the rewrite. I still despise what you wrote Flash did to get Sunset back.
This was really a cowards way out, he sent some hate mail and that help to beak her and drive her mad.
Then after learning what happened with the memory stone...... I'm sorry but he didn't just take advantage of Sunset he basically violated her.
DON'T! Don;t say that not true, it is, as much as i hate it, it is true.
He took advantage of Sunset while her memories were gone, and there no excusing it.
It could gone a lot worst but doesn;t change a thing.
He is a coward ad a fool.
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I should have the second chapter up by tomorrow😉
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Don't worry i've read everyones thought's about Flash taking advantage of Sunset and I'll be sure to write a proper apology for him as well as his throughts and feeling throughout the years events.
Also I'm happy you enjoyed my extended cut of the sequel
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:)
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.................THAT THE BIGGEST BULL SHIT I EVER READ!
SERIOUSLY YOU GOING DOWN WITH THIS EVERYTHING IS FINE ROUTE AFTER WHAT HE DID?!!
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I have read everyones opinions on Flash in this Universe and I tried my hardest to execute his possible redemption. If you want I'll rewrite chapter 2 once I fully complete the story or just remove chapter 2 all together and replace it with Scootaloo's chapter.
I'm sorry I didn't mean to affend you with chapter 2's direction. Look I know Flash made a bigass mistake with using the memory stone as an excuse to rid Sunset of the horrible memory like it never happened just to get his girlfriend back, but I just wanted to give him a happyish ending cause like I said it would be hard for me to write a bad ending to a story as I wouldn't be able to stomach it knowing things might not go back to normal for the protagonist. Again I'm very sorry this chapter wasn't to your liking
Well in his defense, you'd ignored everyone who wanted to apologize to you, beat the crap out of Fluttershy and Pinkie for trying to apologize, and threatened to burn him, Bulk, and the humane 5 for trying to apologize.
I love this. Its great seeing Sunset being the bigger person and finding it in her heart to forgive.
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Look I'm not asking for Sunset to burn him alive or anything.
but i get the wrong message in the end.
She jsut up and forgives him so easily, and the only punishment she gives is to make him pay for their dates for a while.
.........Ssssooooooo if you do something bad say your very very sorry and throw money to make things better?
Realistically, they should have a long break, and even then...How do you trust someone like that?
Also with how he hated her and everything it obvious he has a grudge against her even after proving herself he went out and broke her with a hate mail working with others.
How do we know he won't do it again, it's a bad relation ship.
I mean... just... WHY!?! Real relationships do NOT work like this. At most she should of Acknowledged her own short comings in their relationship and leave it at that. The way you wrote it its almost were supposed to believe that sunset was in the wrong from the very start. And don't even get me started on sunset still having the compactly to forgive them after getting her memories back. When the human 5 and flash did was so wrong from a moral and ethical point of view that they would probably be incarcerated if it happened in equestria. At this point forgiveness is just an after thought, its a scientific impossibility. Sunset honestly should just cut her losses and go home to equestria.
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Like I said I believe in forgiveness, I know Sunset was treated badly by everyone especially Flash for practically manipulating her instead of apologizing but I know as well as her that it's never too late to make amend's.
I found it rather hard to read the flashback portions, not because of the subject matter, but because they are basically huge walls of text that just blend together.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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Good for you, but guess what? Im not you. I do believe in second chances but this isn't the second chance, this is like the 3rd or 4th. I would've been willing to forgive them before the memory stone incident, but what they did only underline the core problem with their behavior. That they are too chicken shit to own up to their mistakes and would rather sweap them under the rug. Eventually someone has to say enough and break the cycle. How sunset is acting is not realistic and thats why im calling bullshit. At the very least she be a luttle more hesitant to forgive the girls, showing them that what they did was still not okay. This story would be way better if we got to see sunset debating with herself and compemplating whether or not she should forgive them. If she wants to forgive them fun, but also let them know that because of this incident and their cowardice, their friendship and relationship in the case of flash wont ever be the same as it once was. Cause guess what, forgiveness is something that must be earned.
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I figured that the flashback sequence would have been better displayed as a whole instead of dividing it up, apologies if it was a little hard to read. Like I said writing fic's isn't my forte as I am a bit rusty at typing up stories
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I respect your opinion. Looking back there were many types of ways to execute it, I just felt that my way would make it easier on everyone to make the whole aftermath of Anon a Miss less stressful. But like I said I'm a bit rusty at typing up stories but I try my best to come up with an execution that's fair for the many readers out there, I appreciate your honest critisism, thank you
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Alright, and i apologize if i was a bit harsh with what i said. I was just mad because i felt the girls and flash got of way to easy, and suset forgiving them happened way to fast. Honestly i was expecting sunset to be at the very least disappointed with the girls and flash's cowardice. Honestly pre alicorn twilight said it best, "friendship isn't always easy, but its always worth fighting for", or something like that. Maybe sunset could tell them something like "im not mad about what happened, im just disappointed that you guys would try to hide it all and act like nothings wrong. I more than anyone else wanted to just move on from the anon a miss fiasco and maybe in time i would've forgiven you. But after what you did at camp everfree, i don't even know if i should waste my time. Just... leave me alone and give me time to think." I'm mean, its not the best, but it certainly feels more like something a real human being in the thralls of inner turmoil would say.
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
Wow, of all the terrible things that could be said to a sibling, that is the worst.
Will that take place in the sixth chapter?
I especially want to see how Sunset deals with Applejack for calling Apple Bloom a worst decision, and Rarity for slapping Sweetie Belle.
If you’re planning on making another Anon a Mystery story, can it talk about what the last 4 1/2 month With the rainbooms, especially, Applejack, Rarity and Rainbow Dash when they heard what the CMC were going through?
Ok WTF! Does this guy haves some short of "Spider sense" that let's him know when Applebloom tries to runaway and a tracking device planted on her so he could find her easily.
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Anyway's some people disliked my anon a mystery stories because some of em weren't too happy with the outcomes of each of there endings.
Oh sorry man I've been busy with ch 5 I forgot to respond to you, my apologies
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I may write a short epilogue story after the stories done showing Sunset having a little conversation with Applejack and Rarity, But Sunset know's they didn't mean too plus they did apologize.
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Well they did technically hear what they've been throught after their relatives phoned each of em telling them what's been going on with the three of em for 4 1/2 months.
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Well her uncle probably asked some of his buddies in town if they've spotted Bloom anywhere in the area, and he did see the statement on his card that showed a $200 purchase of a plane ticket.
I know it said that big Mac and sugar bell we’re on good terms and all, but I still think it would be better if they were back together. I can imagine Apple Bloom constantly visiting sugar bell and begging her to get back with big Mac, And big Mac would probably find her and bring her home and talk with her that while he appreciates what she was trying to do, he tells her That he decided he deserved to be broken up considering that he wanted to hurt his youngest Sister, and that sugar bell should be with a man who isn’t a pervert. Some time later, Sugar Bell visit Sweet Apple Acres And tells the Apple family that after thinking about what Apple Bloom has been telling her about big Mac and having a discussion with Party favor, Sugar bell decides to give big mac another chance.
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It's no prob good buddy, like I said I don't mind honest critisism. It actually helps me to improve my stories in the future so I don't make any mistakes
What about Apple Blooms' Uncle? Isn't he going to get arrested and answer for his abusive treatment to Apple Bloom, his Wife, and Braeburn?
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You'll see his fate soon in the final chapter😉
nice work
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Thanks man, i'm happy you enjoyed the story
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I'm not apologizing for my reaction.
it was hard enough to accept Sunset forgiving the girls so easily, all you need to add was them running through a field of flowers going LALALALALALALALALA. crap bit.
Only bit i liked was why Sunset freaked out and reacted the way she did.
How she acted and why made sense........
But the forgiving them so easily still stinks.
But no that wasn't the worst bit. The Bit on forgiving Flash........................ there no emote to express how i feel, and it so hard not to say words about it even now.
I know what to compare what he did but i refuse to as I'm hoping I'm over thinking it! I really do.
But again it still stinks and feels so...unrealistic and stupid....sorry just how I feel.
the rest of the story si good, it's shocking and tragic, but at least things work out.
Now reading Bloom's story.
Ok wow...bloom really screwed up, but so did Big Mac.
Sad Sugar Belle broke up with him but understand.
Liked the twist on cousin still hope the aunt faces prison time too, neglect is neglect. she turned a blind eye., but moving to the next chapter.
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He's Mr Peterson from Hello Neighbor.
(Joke explanation; the AI in the game Hello Neighbor is completely broken, in that the owner of the house you're breaking into always knows where you are. However, this is nerfed by his complete inability to navigate the house.)
I don't believe any of this bullshit.
Still don't believe that.
As much as I want to kill myself..... Nah, I'm not gonna do it yet.
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Don't say that man It's never too late💔! For Scootaloo and Sweetie belle the point of their chapters was to show that while they believe that they deserved the punishments they were given due to Anon a Miss, they shouldn't believe that getting hurt will make up for the stuff they've done. And Sunset knew that hurting themselves wasn't the answer as it's never too late to make amends especially since they were forgiven by their sisters and the school despite everything they've put them through last christmas.
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I'm utterly shocked you care.