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Riossumari
I'm here to write fanfics and love ponies, mostly love the ponies. But writing fanfics is still good.
Riossumari
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off topic but how did you post this on the 16th although its the 15th
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It was after Midnight when I posted it where I'm at. Probably has something to do with that.
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oh where im at its 11:49
To be honest, this story and a lot of stories in this series are a little hard to read. At times it is just a huge paragraph which fills up the entire screen and it make it hard to read. I would like to see some of these massive walls of texts broken up into different paragraphs to make it easier on the eyes while reading it.
Other than that, these stories have been an interesting read.
This could have been a decent story if it were not for the bad/missing punctuation, endless paragraphs, and the criminal lack of editing.
next Luna please
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Sorry about that, bad habit I have. My brain gets so eager to type it up that I forget to make breaks in the writing, I'll try to correct this in my future stories.
Damn dude you're on a roll here.
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Thanks, I got an unusually large amount of inspiration for my fics, hardest part is always deciding which pony is next.
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Well, you don't have many left now. You could challenge yourself and see if you could do Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash at the same time. Them trying to serve as an anchor for the other so neither fall to Riegel's charms, but it being useless in the end as he wears both down into submission.
Something tells me that that hypnosis used on Pinkie Pie would be questionable if it works
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Seeing as that one episode starlight used a mind control spell on her without any issues I’d say he wouldn’t have any problems.
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That was more of a Mindless hypnosis where they keep most of the personality year
Rereading this I suppose the logical step to this particular fic is rarity inviting coco pommel and sassy saddles to “meet” Rigel. You could even do a bonus chapter in which he enthralls fleur or photo finish!
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Oh, a story with Sassy would be fun. Coco I have mixed feeling about (she's so adorable, it'd feel wrong to do this to her) and I could definitely see Rarity sneaking Rigel into the Canterlot branch of her business.
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That would be fun! Rarity maybe could lure some of her more important clients to the back of her boutique for a special “session” or something like that and meet Rigel in the back! Maybe instead of coco he could enthrall suri.
Okay! Now THIS one was AWESOME! In my headcanon, Rarity is the filthiest slut out of all her friends, though she does her best to hide it behind a thin veneer of gentility. I had a girlfriend like this once; bossy, headstrong, always mouthing off...but a pure cock worshiper! She tried desperately to hide her true nature from me because she wanted to be seen as "strong and independent," but the only thing that got truly got her off in bed was having me treat her like the slut she knew she was. She would have the most mind-blowing orgasms, but then the next day start a fight with me as if it was MY fault she'd acted that way!
Women...