Blueblood is officially the most hated stallion in equestria since that incident at the gala, but were we really fair to judge him so quickly? Find the real story behind Bluebloods tragedy in, Blueblood Un-jerked!
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Helpful crit appreciated, and If you like this, well Im just getting warmed up. The best is yet to come!
Some people need to pick up the like about this.
Anyway I liked 
We shall see. I'll give you a like, and watch for what happens.
Well done on a first fic my friend, but remind me the next time I see you in person (presumably tomorrow) to slap you for making a pyro reference. I mean really
1264240 No pressure or anything, thanks for liking!
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I mean, 7 likes, 3 dislikes. 10 TOTAL! But anyways good job. I wanna see more!!!
Considering that no one seems to know who Rarity is in-show, I doubt Blueblood would lose stature like that based on her word.
Uuuuuugh.... You REEEEEAALLLLY need to lay off the siege warfare thing.....:\
hey it me u know who i love this
now im happy
WE DEMAND MORE FOO!
I cant work right now due to schoolwork and I should be able to get back on track by november 16th. A week or two after that and I think I'll be able to release the newest chapter to the public. Sorry for the delay guys, I'll be back soon!
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Oh uh sorry,
I was just getting all excited. But I did notice some errors from start to end. But too lazy to point them out. 
I gotta say, not bad. Just a few minor quirks here and there, but great story nonetheless. I suggest writing out the numbers instead of using actual numbers, it just makes the writing look better. Also when switching in between talking quotes, start a new paragraph or indent or show that another pony is talking. It makes for a less confusing dialog, and doesn't make us wonder who is talking each time. That's all the quirks I have as of now, good luck with the new chapter.
Woot! New chapter finally out of the shipyard! No wait, not that shipyard!
Want a cupcake?
I'll see how things go from here.
lol loved that chaptar end
1637589 Hmmm, thanks for the critique! I'll try to implement these posthaste!
1697561 How is that an error? If I remember correctly one is supposed to capitalize names.
1697561 If I may ask, I dont see how that was an error.
Well I guess Pinkie want's to make white CUPCAKES
DUDE YOUR KILLING ME NOT RELESSING THE NEXT CHAPTER PLZ PLZ PLZ DO IT 4 FLUTTERSHY
I'm terribly sorry for the negligence, I've had a terrible case of writers block and the next chapter should be out in the following couple of weeks, hang in there!
I see a little possible blueapple there.
If things don't go well with rarity hes got other options now at least.
I knew applejack wouldn't hold a grudge on somepony for having a different opinion on her food then most and I'm glad it shows here.
Is the next chapter coming out any time soon?
When is the next chapter coming out?
Well, I'm sure you can fix this Bluey. *snerk* No really. You can fix it! It will be *snerk* easy!
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! He's screwed!!!
Yeah. That went better than I expected.
The fact that it went worse than BB expected says a lot, though.