Something strange is happening down in the Everfree Forest, so Luna goes to investigate, but is unprepared for what, and indeed who she is going to find.
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Masterfully well done. Very entertaining and suspenseful throughout!
Also yes. Twilight will need calming.
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Hey thanks!
Great to see you again
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I must say that the story did not live up to my expectations. :(
I love watching the various interactions between Nightmare moon and Princess Luna, and this is what I expected from this story, but in the end, this interaction turned out to be catastrophically small.
after a long journey to it, it all ended before it really began.
I now felt myself in the place of an adventurer who went through the dungeon to the chest to find that it was almost empty.
nevertheless, I like the story.
P.S. at the end a thought came to my mind. Luna with such a proposal destroys her evil twin and is sure that Nightmare moon knows nothing but to do evil, but did she ever think of "how to explain to a blind man what a color is if he has not seen anything but darkness from birth?"
This is giving me "Into The Depths" vibes and I love it. Great work
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I felt it was more of an atmospheric adventure through an abandoned castle, and even if the ending wasn't as epic as I would hope it still got the job done. It feels like this was a short side story that could be canon.
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Thanks - glad you're enjoying it!
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Thanks for the comment - NMM remains undefeated and ready to make future appearances!
Still trying to see nightmare as a bad guy
Interesting how this goes
Both existing seperatly, interesting and unique thought
Smart move, luna
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Thanks for commenting - nice to have your feedback!
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Mhm