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bookhorse125


I like ponies, books, writing books, books about ponies, and writing books about ponies.

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This story is a sequel to Light of Your Cutie Mark


After Cozy Glow attempted to steal everypony's cutie mark, the Cutie Mark Crusaders are tasked with reforming her, and it seems to be going well. But what they don't know is that a new force is growing in the shadows, feeding on Cozy's negative feelings...waiting for a chance to attack.

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Nice story. I would have liked to read a bit more Cozy's transition into actually wanting to be good and a bit more explanation as to how she manifested the Tantabus, but it was overall a fun read.

This was surprisingly wholesome, and I enjoyed the interactions between the CMC and Cozy Glow.

The rest of the charactersation was pretty good too. I enjoyed the balance you weaved throughout the main six.

The critic who ultimately changes her mind off screen, helped add some realisim to the whole thing. Feels very believable all told.

Feels like I missed something in the prequel, but a sweet short story regardless.

Definitely worth the read.

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