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Peridork


Sometimes you lose yourself in your own narcissism. That's when you find out you might be the bad guy.

Comments ( 8 )

I think I'm a clone now
There's always two of me just a-hangin' around

You've made me wonder if there was any connection between Too Many Pinkie Pies and them later having Weird Al make a guest appearance via ponysona...

I approve the Weird Al song titles

First off, a weird Al reference on a fic where cheese is featured is right on.

Nice to see normal Pinkie with her smarts and craziness. She feels pretty good and it's nice to see her as an intelligent party pony. Her clones feel like varying degrees of dumb and dumber and I can see this getting crazy.

Real crazy.
We got a good setup chapter with high hopes for the crazy part two. Cheese is either going to have waay too much fun or get worn out :pinkiehappy:

this gets a like solely for the references to Weird Al songs
shame it's a sequel to hot garbage, but nothing's perfect

Comment posted by The Lightisville Council deleted Jan 12th, 2022

Part two pls this is really great story so far keep up the good work

Well for a mature take on a less than stellar episode, I think you did really well. Improved it in many ways even…
In all, it was a fun read. Lots of good, random gags and funny moments with enough depth to make this memorable. I mean, that use of inflatables is one way to nail a lot of Pinkies in short order…
I while I had thought you would go out on more pinkie and cheese, for the final scene… what we instead got was still quite fun.
…Also kinda felt like an adult ending to celestia receiving the letters. Just like the tame ending to a lot of the episodes where we see her read over the letter.

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