Twilight never became an alicorn princess and instead lost her life as a result of Star-Swirl the Bearded's unpredictable spell. But being dead doesn't prevent Twilight from visiting those she cares for...
With Crimson and his friends stationed in Ponyville, the mages must now balance their work and personal lives. Friends will become enemies, enemies will become friends and forces will clash as everything Crimson holds dear is threatened.
You know the story of Nightmare Moon. Or so you think. What many do not know is the story before she was banished, My name is Shadow Moon but everypony over the past thousand years have called me Twilight Sparkle and this is my story.
The story title has quiet misspelled as does the short description
the distent Sweet Apple Acers.
distant
as statures oversaw
statues
Rarity sow for
sew
utility. Desprit, they
Desperate
I'm over here as a result of the authors note on bound snow as this is not something i'd normally look past the description of since pinkie is mentioned as the main character and I don't like pinkie, also it's E rated which seems odd for a horror fic everyone dies in.
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It is just a normal day in Ponyville. That is, until something happens to Pinkie.
Which isn't at all descriptive of the story as pinkie ends up being insignificant and there is no mention of petrification anywhere so the appropriate groups likely missed it. The short description was better as it mentioned that it was the end of the world.
oh my goodness. this is amazing
Have an up vote, for making me feel sad.
Damn...
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Ya! It worked!
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Thank you!
How horrible. 10/10
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Glad you enjoyed it.
The story title has quiet misspelled as does the short description
distant
statues
sew
Desperate
I'm over here as a result of the authors note on bound snow as this is not something i'd normally look past the description of since pinkie is mentioned as the main character and I don't like pinkie, also it's E rated which seems odd for a horror fic everyone dies in.
The long description shows up in search
Which isn't at all descriptive of the story as pinkie ends up being insignificant and there is no mention of petrification anywhere so the appropriate groups likely missed it.
The short description was better as it mentioned that it was the end of the world.
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I am really bad at spelling. I guess practice makes perfect, so hopefully my writing will make it better eventually.
Anyways, thanks for the feed back. I edited the long description a little to mention the petrification.