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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(A request from A Man Undercover who originally wanted to do the idea but eventually gave it up for adoption. Takes place right after "Amending Fences" for obvious reasons.)

Although Twilight's trip back to Canterlot to reconnect with (and apologize to) her old friends was a big success, there was one friend she didn't get a chance to see: Lyra Heartstrings.

Even knowing that her old friends don't bear a grudge against her, Twilight is still determined to apologize to Lyra just in case. And since Lyra lives in Ponyville, Twilight sees an opportunity.

Upon returning to Ponyville, Twilight seeks out Lyra in order to have a talk. But how did Lyra view Twilight's behavior in the past? Is it possible that she holds a grudge like Moondancer did?

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That was a cute short story :twilightsmile:

Really good work on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in this one-shot. And, yeah, you had a good point in the author's notes. And, I probably better end my review here.

Lovely! I always liked it how they rectoned Lyra having been a friend of Twilight due to the cameo in the very first episode.

And Bon-bon, I agree. she can be just a good friend, doesn't always have be a lover

Nice. Disappointed Lyra didn’t open that conversation with “Who are you again?”

But nice.

10809582 Pretty sure Lyra would know by now who Twilight is, even if she may have only vague memories of their Canterlot days.

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It was a joke. Sorry.

Otherwise, there’s almost no difference between this meeting than the first one in the actual episode.

Aww that was nice it was pretty weird that Lyra did not show up in the episode that would have been awesome to hear from her how she's been doing lately but I'm glad she's a very understanding Pony

Before I read this, this is definitely a missed opportunity.

Thank you for creating this story, and for accepting my request. Ever since I started reading it, I found myself enjoying this story in more ways than one. I can totally see this happening officially in the universe of the show.

In all honesty, I think you also did a better job at tackling this concept than I ever would. And I agree with you about Bon Bon. She wouldn’t have had much of a role to play in this story now that I think about it more, and her inclusion likely would’ve been unnecessary.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Just what it needed to be.

This was a nice short story and I liked how Lyra explained things.

A cute idea, and one executed quite well. Thanks for writing!

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