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You're a really good writer at getting me to read outside of my genre. The steady pacing of your stories really invites the reader along for the ride. I'm familiar with effectively none of the crossover material, but the way you convey it here makes it so that I don't entirely feel lost. Also, there is one major difference between this story and Fallout: Equestria (and most major spin-offs) that is really worth mentioning. Here, the characters are experienced inhabitants of the world. All of the elements of the setting (on some level) are very normalized to them. Traditional stories following Kkat's epic usually play on both a) throwing the character into an unfamiliar setting or having them challenge it in some way or b) by extension, the Equestrian Wastelands being jarring and unfamiliar from the world that ponies are 'supposed' to inhabit. This is refreshing and different.
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To be honest, I don't think you know how much a comment like this-- or any really-- mean to me. Thank you and I'm so glad you're enjoying the fiction!
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Alright. This chapter was very sweet! bittersweet, too. I do hope that Serenity got through to him. Kinda hoping he doesn't go around thinking Serenity is a spirit himself.
Though, then again, I can see him ascending to becoming one in the end, that is depending on how hebdeals with Retribution.
This chapter liftsaway some ambiguities and it's nice to see that the stable dwell was actually a bit of a nerd. Big vocab and all. She seems a lot more well rounded now after only a hand full of chapters.
Serenity's character arc definently turned, and It brings me joy to see him recommuning with his brother and finding a little something to latch on to.
As for the town, to see him exploring by memories was really cool. The reminescing was a neat touch to even the flow of the chapter and give a bit of context on his kidhood. Overall, solid chapter.