The synopsis confuses me. When did the Storm King appear in the Equestria girls world? And when did Ponyville ever appear in it?

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It's a minor crossover, it was easier than explaining why there is a version of Sunset Shimmer around.

“ARGH!! IT’S NO USE!!!” screamed Twilight as she threw the book into the air “No matter how many books I read, I still can’t stop thinking about Spike and Rarity… maybe I shouldn’t have agreed to the idea… Nah, knowing Rarity, she would’ve raped him if I hadn’t, plus, she’ll only have him for tonight, so that means, tomorrow Spike and I can go back to making babies!... Oh yeah, still not on my period… oh well, we can still have a great time, just the 2 of us,” she said

WTF?! Twilight!!! Plus, Rarity would never f****** do that! And Spike will hate her, and possibly the rest of you forever. And this potential act, will give him a good reason to leave, due to your psychotic sex drives!!

“Girls?... why don’t we…” Spike began

“SIP IT SPIKE!!!!” they both screamed at him making shut his mouth

I won't act submissive as Spike. I mean, a Real Man NEEDS to have his say to this too? Otherwise, this won't be a equal relationship.

And they casually making it like Spike is just a "living sex toy" for them to share with. This will not stand!

And maybe have Celestia or Spike himself stop this jealous rivalry. Before they do something that they will heavily regret from their uncontrolled envy and lust!!!

Why did I get Fairy Tail vibes from this?

...Because that's a plus in my book!

Twilight is such a whore and terrible friend. I really hate hey in this fic. And I hope the stalker is fs and she gets to be with some and rarity and NOT with twilight. But heh that's me.

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Pia, I have a feeling the "stalker" is indeed Fluttershy, so I am looking forward to seeing her. We know from the previous context tha Shy has romantic feelings for Spike as well as Rarity, Twilight, and Pinkie Pie (I speculate she is the fourth of the Mane 6 that will reveal she has a crush on New Spike, but often times I'm wrong ) Though I think she is gonna surprisingly show she's the most promiscuous of the mares. As the saying goes: "Its always the quiet ones..."

Good stuff, can't wait for more.