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After escaping their stone imprisonment, the ex-villains of Equestria, Chrysalis, Tirek and Cozy Glow go on an unexpected journey together, where along the way, they’ll discover there's more to each other than they first thought, opening doors to bonds they never would of thought possible.

Is power really just all Cozy needed? Outside approval what Tirek wanted? Or a new place for Chrysalis to belong? What do these three very different creatures have to learn, or gain, from each other?


Featured on 28/4/2021. Thank you!<3

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Cozy lowered her head, her tone going soft. “It just.. it wouldn’t be as fun on my own..”

“Fun? You think all this as fun?

“I mean, don’t get me wrong, nothing was better than seeing those princesses tremble and quiver before us, and blowing up that castle into oblivion was amazing!” her smile slowly dropped. “But if I could do it all again..”

Tirek studied the sudden change in mood in her expression. “You really are a child.”

This was a surprisingly poignant exchange. Tirek's right, we do forget Cozy is a child, while lumping her in with the other two.

Interesting story
Going to keep track on it

That was pretty good introduction into the story. I can't wait to see the next chapter. :)

I have been waiting for a story of this type for a long time. Looking forward to the next chapter.

At some point they should consider that if it hasn’t been all that long - say, twenty or thirty years - then they’re coming at this with a lot less then they did before and going after Twilight and her allies when they have a lot more. Tirek isn’t exactly in the wrong by wanting to take some time to assess the situation.

I fully expect Chrysalis to come back to them just as she did in “Frenemies”.

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You know what they say; there isn’t the content you want to see, fine, I’ll do it myself. :moustache:

Great start! I'm liking your depiction of the trio so far. I think it makes sense that Tirek would be the first to give up. I do wonder how they got free from the stone though. Maybe the spell was faulty or there was some sort of incident that despelled a bunch of things. Could even be Discord's doing. Either way, I can't wait for more!

Truly, a punishment worse than death.

I hate how the finale turned the heroes into such cruel people.

“The princesses tried to lock me in a facility for that number of years as well,” Chrysalis hissed, staring down at the ground.

So the comics are canon here. I wonder as to what extent.

Tirek studied the sudden change in mood in her expression. “You really are a child.”

A fact that sadly often got forgotten by much of the characters.

I'm tracking this and intrigued to see where it goes.

Lets hope the hating battalion wont find this story...

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Wish more people wrote with that frame of mind.

This definitely has potential, and I'm always looking for good fics with Cozy playing a major role, so I plan to stay tuned! I also thought I'd point out some minor typos.

More new and taller.

Should be "newer."

nothing to do except bind my time

I believe it's "bide my time."

“Fun? You think all this as fun?

Should either be "You think of all this as fun?" or "You think all this is fun?" Personally, I'd go with the former, but either works fine.

This remind of this fan art

https://derpibooru.org/images/2525529?sort[]=260&sort[]=2525529&sd=desc&sf=upvotes&q=a+better+ending+for+cozy

Truly, a punishment worse than death.

So true.Again the darkest moment for me from the show

Keeping a watch on this.

Good story so far! It’s well written, and handles the character aspect well. I’ll give it a follow. I also didn’t like their fate on the show; it seemed uncharacteristically cruel for the ponies to do. I do want to know how long it’s been as well; most of the ponies really could be dead by now. I look forward to more updates.

Promising start. Characterization looks good. I especially like your portrayal of Chrysalis and Tirek. They feel very in character so far. Can't wait to see more.

When will the next chapter be roughly?

I haven't read it yet, but I love how the description asks a question and the title of the only chapter gives the answer. Very clever

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I didn’t even plan that akdjaks But I’m glad it gave someone the notion of a hidden message/spoiler :twilightsmile:

-Spends 1000 years trapped in stone with nothing but your own thoughts and existential dread.
-Doesn't go stark raving mad.

this is a sequel to "Worse Way to be Bad"?

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As fun and fitting as it would be to link them together, it is not. That being said, it wouldn’t be a surprise if it did start to appear that way as the story progresses.

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it is a pity that it is not so. :(
I liked that story and I was waiting for its continuation. :)

Very good story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

My only hope is they run into Sombra again.

This is really nice so far, I'm going to keep an eye on it. A
And also, I'm glad you're writing this story, because I don't have the time or the discipline to "do it myself" :rainbowwild:

A promising start to an intriguing story premise! Your previous story involving this trio was really good, so I can only hope that this one also handles them well. I’m looking forward to their inevitable moments of bonding and trusting each other again.

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