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Hey wasnt there already a story like this with the same cover art and everything?
Edit: ooo i see i have found you wrote both of these, is this like a rewrite or something?
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He's right! I'm also confused? Because, I do have seen this before.
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Yes he wrote both these stories, check his user page
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Author's note in the first chapter says he wanted to take another crack at this concept, and wanted to bring it up to snuff with his current writing style/skill.
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So a remake?
A more fun version?
No offense to the first one.
It was good!
Writers sometimes feel as though they missed a mark with a project so they try making a new version.
I want to read this, but I remember the last time you try to make a story with Spike and Celestia.... I'll keep my distance from this one.
I like how she was so shocked that she dropped the "Princess" honorific and just referred to her as Celestia
So, is this gonna end the same as Playing Pretend, or are you gonna do something different?
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why? what happened?
and there we go, kkkkk !!!!
A few. errors I found in the first chapter.
he counts deny the majesty of the view Celestia possessed.
he could not deny
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"You just need to be your charming yourself.”
be your charming self."
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“So...” He cleared his throat to break the always silence."
break the silence. or break the awkward silence.
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surly you’ve told me about them before
surely you’ve told me about them before
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Second chapter.
Once again, random browsing delivers me to a surprising but delightful gem. I sincerely hope that Luna pulls some shenanigans.
My only problem is I'm not sure which your going for, and I'm not sure you do either. Like the idea, but I can't help but wonder if this is really, Anthro, and not just Humanized. Cause when I see details like, "skin and feet", instead of "fur, scales, and clawed feet or hooves", Humanized is the impression I get.
Sorry. I'm a visual reader, and that's what I'm seeing. I'm not going to down vote. It's just something that is turning me off. In a sexual and non-sexual way!
I already see yet another divergence from the original. Been quite a few actually. I got to say I really want to see how this turns out. Keep up the great work.
chining should be chilling I believe.
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Why? What happened to the last one?
'The End?', I don't buy it, but here's hoping for a sequel or epilog
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This depends on whether it is 25% 50% 75% (anthropological) or 100% (feral form)
Famous Last Words! Plus who's urges will lose control?
It begins.
Way to go your highness.
I got an idea.
She Overdue Thirsty.
Busted!
Luna experience the Dragon.
Here's my idea that involves continuous sex drives.
This more felt like Celestia ordering Spike to rape Luna then anything else.
im going to stop reading stories with #sex because most of them now have rape or insinuate somebody has been raped
Another chapter would be excellent. I feel like Celestia and Spike should decide if they want to keep this going.