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Isseus


Cutie Mark Crusaders Forever!!!

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A very lovely and playful story.

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I love it how folks are afraid to comment on stories now because they're afraid of getting down-vote bombed and cenceled because they liked foalcon. Hell, I'm pretty sure several of the folks following me do so only because they want to downvote anything I write, because I got loads of downvotes the moment this fic was published.

Love being popular. :twilightsmile:

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Didn't you explicitly mention Scootaloo was sexually mature? That's not foalcon.

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Oh, she's definitely a foal here. Gotta have some standards!

Story good, porn not so much.

It lacks a bit of description, but most importantly length. This is quite literally a penetration and orgasm in a single paragraph.

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That's a very valid point. I wanted to show Scootaloo's inexperience and how overwhelmed she was sexually with her quick orgasm. I also put way more emphasis on the foreplay and not the actual coitus, because I've found it very difficult to find any enticing way to describe what is basically hydraulics.

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