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A creative Pegasister with a love for writing stories.

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Eleanor Wolfe has been a Pegasister since she was a little girl. Her favorite ponies have always been Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy. One night, she watches one of her favorite episodes, and Pinkie Pie extends her hoof through the television, beckoning Eleanor to take her hoof.

Curious and taken by Pinkie Pie's character, Eleanor takes the hoof and is transported into the world of Equestria. However, the Mirror Pool makes one tiny mistake, Eleanor emerged from the pool as Surprise from Gen 1.

Will Eleanor accept her fate as Pinkie Pie's Pegasus twin, or will she be able to find a way home?

First two chapters take place during 'Too Many Pinkie Pies'.


Cover Art belongs to SparkingSnowflake.
Pony Designs belong to Taneysha.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro, DHX Studios and Lauren Faust.

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Comments ( 8 )

A few beginner's mistakes, but nothing too glaring. Seems a fun premise. I'll give this a look.

Great work can I ask why did you change it from Ellie to pinkie pie to Ellie to surprise ?

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I thought it would make a better story. Since Pinkie Pie is the reincarnation of Surprise.
^_^

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Ok thank and you are right it is a better story I can’t wait for the next chapter

Well this was an interesting start! Very curious to see if the main 6 will try and force her back into the pool after this. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is going to end with Ellie getting zapped by Twilight, isn't it?

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