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Thesmokinguy


*Turns the freaking horses gay*

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Working at the friendship school as student counselor has kept Starlight away from spending time with Trixie. When she finally gets the chance to pay Trixie a visit, Starlight notices that she is acting weirder than usual. In order to save their relationship, Starlight comes up with a plan to find out what is going on with Trixie.

She wasn't ready for the answer


Based off the "arrival" prompt from Bean's writing group. And now time to give the special thanks to these beautiful people because they are beautiful and everyone needs to know it.

Bean besto editor

Gadot,Biké,Sledge for their sicc feedback

Sinner boi for his help with the title

Rdt,Mykola, poison joke, waywardfallout and gamu for being swell proofreaders

And everyone in the BWG discord server for their awesomeness and support. Stay classy.

*terrific alternative art from the talented short-tale:*

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Comments ( 26 )

Gotta love the Starlight Glimmer and Trixie interaction and relationship.

I helped :D

Really glad to see this up, Smokey! A great StarTrix story from a truly sicccccccc writer. :heart:

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Yeaaa boii
No longer fimfic virgin amirite??
Didnt know it would feel so good
*insert excited tavi here*

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Aaayyy you finally comment on stuff of mine. Now i know how you feel, and it's amazing.

A great StarTrix story

I learned from the best :ajsmug:

Huzzah! Glad to see this up :twilightsmile:

"They are, wow…" Trixie’s wide open eyes narrowed in a frown. "It’s a shame Trixie is not very fond of plants these days. But I guess I can bring myself to accept them." She took the flowers with her magic, carelessly stuffing them inside her hat.

Ugh, such great Trixie. Love her!

"And now, it's time to make a lousy plant, disappear!" Trixie said, her voice a mixture of anger and joy.

As I said before, I do love this mental image of Trixie being arch-rivals with a plant


Great to see this up, Smokes!

D'aaaaawwww this was so funny and so in-character that this is canon for me now :heart:

1000 coins says they did it in Twilight's room.

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Ugh, such great Trixie. Love her!

How could you not? :smug_octavia:

Glad that this fic made you laugh! That's the least I can offer to my faithful readers: happiness.
Because you deserve no less :twilightsmile:

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In exchange of this flattering comment, you can have a cute startrix as wonderful as you are.
Now, feel flattered

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Wait! I forgot that Spike and Gabby were snogging on Twilight's bed a few weeks ago.

It hit my heart in all the right strings

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This fills me with joy
My readers happiness
Is my happiness
Thanks for reading!

I rate it... 🍵/10

HA HA! YOU THOUGHT I HAD FORGOTTEN DIDN'T YOU!
I MOST CERTAINLY DID NOT!
I promised I'd read this, and now I finally have!
Huzzah!
Now, for the review.
This. Was. HILARIUOS!
Just... I was laughing at so many occasions, nearly fell off my seat once!
I thought it would be some form of drama or something! But in the end, the thing Trixie was jealous of was.... A BLOODY POTTED PLANT THAT WAS A NAMED CHARACTER!
Silly Trixie, don't you know that named objects are immortal?!
That ending though... implications abound. Heh, spicy.
It was a fast-paced read, but that's okay. Nothing wrong with a quick read. Makes me wonder why I didn't just take the time to read it up until now...
ANYWAYS THAT'S IRRLELVENT! MOVING ON!
I always liked the pairing of Trixie and Starlight. There's some real chemistry between them in the show, and this just hilariously became something that I can totally see happening in the show. The sheer... absurdity of Trixie being jealous of Starlight over a plant... Yeah, I think it can fit in the ridiculousness that is MLP FIM.
Anyways!
Onward!

Hello, a review to your story has been posted. I hope you find it helpful. :raritywink:

Howdy, hi!

A review from the mansion to you!

I have reviewed this story over at the Reviewer's Mansion!

“I'm still not letting you get close to Phyllis within a ten meter radius though.”

Forbidden romance sequel pls

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