Have you ever wondered what would happen if a strange anomaly ends up in Equestria, in the form of a human boy that can mess up the world like he's a glitch in a program? Oh, he also has amnesia and met Discord early on. What could go wrong?
This is the story of Jaune, the protagonist, as he travels the world of Equestria in search of answers to how he came to this world, what he really is, why he can do all sorts of crazy things, and why a strange-looking creature kept trying to adopt him. Maybe a certain group of ponies can help him on his quest as they teach him the meaning of friendship...perhaps he will learn something else along the way too.
Chapters (4)
Intrigueing. I look gorwards to where you take this
You have piqued my interest 😗
loved the chapter.
though i do see alot of typos and wierd spacing, my advice would be for you to get grammarly because im too lazy to point out typos
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Oh yeah, I kinda forgot about grammarly, thanks for reminding me.
Good job on the battle between the glitch and discord, really clever!
:D
Wait a minute, "bipedal"
Are the ponies here anthropomorphic?
thanks for the chapter.
i wonder if your space button is broken or you just forget to put space after some of the [.]'s and [,]'s
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Oh sorry, I messed up there.The ponies here are ponies, I thought Bipedal meant walking on two legs.
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Yeah that happens to me often. I just kinda thought it was normal at this point
Please update
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No, it is, what i meant was are they humanoid or not?
Coming up next on, robot wa- i mean, on glitch wars! Will jaune defeat the glitch monster? Will itbbe able to eat the fireworks? Will twilight have a mental breakdown!? Yes no maybe, possibly, could be happening right now~
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They are regular four legged ponies
And so, the beast went on an uncontrollable rampage and the equestria as we know it was no more