Screaming at bread. I explore too many passions and devote too little to all of them.
After spending some more time with Scootaloo, Twilight starts to wonder about her home life.
Her discovery has her want to give Scootaloo the family she deserves. She should have no problems with Spike and Rainbow Dash there to help.
Warning: contains small amounts of twidash, scootadopt, cuteness, and ponies
Starts after the episode "Twilight Time" but before "Maud Pie"
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Why isn't there an alternate universe tag?
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The established canon of the show is not changed in order to support the story, so an alternative universe tag is not needed from what I believe.
nice start
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Thanks
hit me with that twidash yeyeyeye
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It'll be here eventually. I have plans.
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I really love your story, in fact, one of the best ive read, keep your good work, can i suggest more interactions with Scootaloo and Spike, i think it would be cool, they have almost the same age.
Sorry for the grammar, i speak spanish
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Thanks for the comment
I do plan on having them interact more. Scoot is younger, but Spike matures slowly since Dragons live longer (assuming from series anyway).
Keep working on this please, i love it
Starts interesting, i look forward for more.
Very interesting and well written. Will definitely monitor this story.
that was very wholesome.
Thank you for the new chapter👍
Daww its so cute those 4 are like a family
Twi and Rainbow are the older siblings and Spike and Scoot are the youngest
the Scootaloo = that Scootaloo maybe? Just trying to help. :)
Hope to see more soon, I like Scoot-a-dopts, especially with a side of Twidash. Curious to know if Rainbow found them... maybe an empty house?
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Thanks for the fix
New chapters should be out soon. This next one I really wanted to make sure I got right.
OMFG, the I before E thing, is that inspired by the YouTube video where Scootaloo is dubbed by the comedian?! (Vague I know, but I needed to ask asap)
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Yes lol
I love Brian Regan as a comedian and the Scootaloo animation done by Deadlycomics is so good.
Hope to see more soon. :) Twilight being confused is pretty adorable. Scootaloo seems to really like the attention Twilight is giving her, wonder when we'll see her home life.
Adorable chapter but I really hope Twilight isn't gonna seriously punish Spike.
only error i saw was near the end with "readies" being used instead of "ready" but otherwise it's pretty good
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Fixed it. Thank you for catching that and the comment
"Scootaloo joined in with" to me this sounded off but putting in "as well" in place of "with" could flow better
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your welcome and can do the same for other chapters if you want
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I think I meant to put "us" after, but looking over I'd just remove it. "Scootaloo joined in" seemed good. Thank you for the catch
1 i found here was "Very few consistent parental figures in her life and her obsession with flying led her to idolize and obsession over Rainbow Dash" to me i believe the 2nd "obsession" should be "obsess"
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Thank you, I forgot to fix that earlier before putting the chapter out.
nice chapter
OK, hold the F up.
I don’t know if it’s entirely fair for Snap and Mane. Did they make stupid mistakes? Yes. Could they have responded better? Also yes, but Rainbow saying they abandoned Scoots just for “a job.” Girl, this ain’t no desk job, this is stuff that can legit save people’s lives. As far as we know, NO OME ELSE DOES THIS. All I’m saying is that Mane and Snap aren’t perfect, but they also aren’t the worst.
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This is Rainbow talking though. Loyalty and all that. Who has shown in multiple episodes she would give up her dream job that involves helping others and saving lives for her friends. I don't think they are the worst, but Rainbow would. Even if it isn't a desk job they are replaceable. Others would take their place if they had to quit.
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Thank you
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I know it's in character for Rainbow, doesn't mean I don't want to call her out on her crap.
I enjoyed this chapter a whole lot.
Added to my read list.
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Glad to hear it, hopefully, the next chapter will be out soon.
I am hoping that Well get an update soon this was good
I’m glad somepony’s finally talking about that horrible episode I said this in an fb post RANT INCOMING: I really hate the last crusade, it’s the worst episode for multiple reasons (I used to think grannies was the worst and it is bad but at least it has a happy ending), in crusade we have hasbro creating characters from nowhere, who didn’t need to exist (and actually make past episodes worse because turns out scootaloo wasn’t an orphan pony she just had neglectful parents). One of worst things is though in the episode they don’t go far enough because in the first few minutes they’re shown to have a good relationship ex. Scoots writing to them, them fawning over her, they’re a bit overeager to move yes but I couldn’t bring myself to hate them misguided they may have been I believe they truly wanted the best for the daughter (though I really was rooting for rainbow to adopt her at the end), to the point where (and this is gonna sound horrible) I almost would’ve preferred them to be out and out abusive just so I could hate them like the show obviously wanted and expected. What they do though is even worse in a comic after the episode (which I can’t bother to learn the name of) they somehow ruin scoot’s parents again painting them as even more neglectful and borderline abusive, and just to add the cherry on top in the end of that whole arc she give up scoots to be adopted by her aunts, so in the span of a single episode (mostly comic) hasbro managed to ruin at least 3 characters, the parents who were only there because they didn’t want scoots to be an orphan pony (which considering what we got woulda been better) and it even managed to ruin scoots a little bit because now in past episodes when scoot herself implies she’s an orphan no she just has neglectful and abusive parents
are scootaloo’s parents dead or just neglecting her, I am on the prowl for answers, but I’m not going to interrogate people, just a little curious
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agreed with ya there
Just checking in. Hope you come back to this story someday. It is really good.
This is very good, AeroFiction. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I hope this gets updated someday
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Me too, I was really liking it when I read it a few months ago.