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WordyWrites
Clop writer with too much on their plate. Trying to level up. PM friendly ^^
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It seems an extra outfit here.
Is this sentence's color correct? I think it should be black tho.
Missing color and italic, maybe.
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I did go back and make some edits regarding the outfit, I may have messed something up!
Colour matches the voice, not the mind, but that doesn't preclude the possibility I ended up switching somewhere.
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I like this story, cool!
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Glad you liked it!
Why do people insist is making this sh*t in second person, I don't want to f*ck a pony, I just want to see a romantic relationship evolve fully goddamit.
That sounds like a... Leap of Logic, to me.
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freedom of artistic expression, one would think.
The double standards from that pony make me mad.
She must've gotten banished to earth by the Elements for being a collosal bitch.
The worst part is it's a completely believable character, there really are people in the world who are self centered psychopaths.
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Then why are you hanging out in the comment sections of blatant pony fetish pornography? Unless...
th.bing.com/th/id/R.12ce79d4bd52fc6b87feeb33a02b5b1d?rik=qBXpULOeNlnr8g&pid=ImgRaw&r=0
Do you see this? This is great. This is hot.
I love that she's fucking terrible, and probably didn't even want pancakes. I love that she gets what she wants. And I love that the character is confused and torn about what the flying fuck just happened.
Solid A+ from me. Even if it is in 2nd person... lol.
Is this supposed to be marked as Incomplete?
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B*tch you dumb? I'm saying my opinion to see if the author gets an idea and does one history I'd like to read, Bro you're dumb as F if you genuinely made this question.
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Yeah not sure about the 2nd person choice myself, was made to really highlight the discomfort for the reader but I'm thinking 1st could have worked equally well, or better. Not gonna change it now though >>
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Yes, there are some planned future updates but also I'm awful about finishing my projects, so who knows...
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Please try to finish.
I mean there must be at least one chapter of conflict where we basically ask 'what gave you the right to do this whole shit and feel ok about it.'
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Whatever happens, I hope Logic Leap gets the ass kicking she deserves, one way or another.
I like to imagine that after this spell wore off she was immediately kicked out, and took a vacation where no one speaks her language, and ponies are considered a delicacy, like Japan.
Great first chapter, hope to see more in the future.
Damn. What a bitch.
Most excellent.
I too hope logical leap gets her comeuppance at the end of the story she basically did what she said "I" would do to a mare in heat. I hope that after this "I" explain what "dubious consent" mean and that "I" in her Estrus-laden body cannot give proper consent when "my" mind is comprised. Second "I" would lecture her on how she forced "me" to be in her body against "my" will. And thirdly lecture her on "Not all Bronies are sexual deviants" who would force themselves on the ponies if given the chance.
Great conflict you have created in this story that it affected the comment section, me included! So now I want to see the conflict resolved and what consequences Logical Leap suffers in the end and how she will HAVE to attone for it
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Future chapters will definitely play some more with the situation and explore what happened... but you can expect them to be equally porny and dealing with consent about as seriously.
As for comeuppance for Leap, well, wait and see~
How about exercise in the sun? Without the laptop?
Logical Leap: *eeep*
"Well, that explains everything. Sorry for bothering you."
Once this story is over he may update his fantasies.
Technically you are the fuckable little slut of a pony here, Leap.
Good premise.
I look forwards to see what happens next.
We demand MORE
I hope there will be more I also he/she gets pregnant.
Will this continue? Pretty, pretty pleeeeeaaaaassse? :(
I love this story! Please continue it
WHERE IS CHAPTER 2!? /jk
But srsly... Pwetty pwease?
Still hoping for a chapter 2
About a year later, now, and... still no chapter 2 :(
I'm really hopeful that such a chapter will come about at some point, but I don't want to hope in vain. Could you give a sign that you intend to continue this? Pretty please?
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Honestly it's not feeling very likely right now, sorry. I've kinda fallen out of writing for MLP.
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Awwwe :(
That's unfortunate, but I understand. Thank you for the response & clarification! I'll keep this one in my favorites: perhaps one day you might come back to write delicious MLP smut again ;)
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Aw well hopefully you feel back up for doing it sometime we will all be waiting in anticipation
Can't wait to see what happen next