This story is a remake of the Equestria Girls Special "Forgotten Friendship"
Sunset Shimmer. We all know her for how hard she has worked to become the girl we all know and love. And more than that, so do her friends. Until they didn't! Everything she had worked so hard on has been erased, gone as if never existed! No one remembers her, except for the once horrible and tyrant girl she once was that made people suffer and afraid when she ruled CHS with an iron fist! But what if not everyone had forgotten her? Would the help of a single person make it different? Would they be able to solve this memory loss mystery, track down who caused all of this, and fix it before it's too late!!!
Cover art by ilaria122
Chapters (6)
I’m getting that Forgotten Friendship Vibes right now when reading this
So who is the friend, Spike or Twilight?
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My lips are sealed for now but you'll see
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I know it hasn't escaped my mind since I started
Is there going to be any kind of violence in this story?
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There won't be any scenes with blood but there will be like 1 scene where Fluttershy gets hurt in a future chapter. My lips are sealed currently on how it happens so better wait and see.
The story has the "Spike (EQD)" tag, and since who's going to be helping Sunset seems like they would get more attention than Spike, I want to guess Spike going to help, yet that seems somewhat too obvious a choice. Flash Sentry or Sci-Twi (not being losing her memories this time, and could be why there's a "Sci-Twi" tag) look to be a good candidates, but I'm going to be a little bold and swing for the fences.
Who's going to be by Sunset's side is Wallflower Blush, and Trixie really is behind the lost memories.
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Yes your correct, sci twi and spike the dog don't get affected by the memory stone. Spike will still have many lines in the story despite sci twi will have a big role in this I knew it be best I still included Spike. And wallflower will still be the cause of this and trixie is only gonna make 2 or 3 more appearances in this story.
I’m starting to enjoy This version a lot more
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Hopefully others will too, plus the story will get better for what happens in chapter 3
Okay and Twilight just remembers everything, curious.
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Yes exactly, it's what I had planned all along
Are they going to deal with Trixie and Snips and Snails?
Also noticed you left out anon A Miss in the memory sharing.
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Trixie is only planned to appear 1 or 2 more times after this, and I didn't mention anon a miss during the memory sharing since I wanted the scene to focus on good memories instead of bad ones to fit the story.
Hmm, you were right. I didn't see the twist that happened coming!
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As in with trixie helping sunset?
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What, she did? I thought she was trying to cause more trouble in this chapter, not trying to help.
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Oh, nope trixie is only planned to make 2 more appearances in this story and she won't do anything serious like what she did in chapter 3
I'm Looking Forward To The Next Part 😀
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Well your in for a treat since the battle with have something no one will expect is coming
now i want to see how Timber reacts to Sunset being all like "She's taken"
Personally I thought Wallflower was the worst villain in the whole series. I erased everyone memory of so they wouldn't remember me and then I take the fact that I don't have friends out on someone who is trying to be a better person because they used to be a jerk. How selfish can you get. At least the others had decent excuses that were still bad ideas but still better than I'm keeping friends away and making sure you don't get them either.
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Lol
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Yeah I really dislike her a lot, in fact what she did in forgotten friendship was very similar to what I saw happen in a transformers tv show, specially transformers rescue bots season 2 final which involved around memories being erased as well, but worst.
That's Was Very Awesone
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Glad you enjoyed it
Great story!
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Thx
enjoyed the whole story and in the end, it really did make sense. Great Work Evan
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Thx my friend, it's something I'm glad worked out great in the end.
I am so happy she has Twilight there for her.
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Yelp, I am too, it's one of many reasons I wrote this, other than the fact I really loathe "forgotten friendship."
The Sci-Twi/Sunset moments are so sweet 💕. I love those. Also I love the fact that they are all together again.
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I thought it be s nice change since if sunset can't prove it herself than it's up to the girls to find out themselves they'd find much evidence sunset is telling the truth.
This is intense just like the episode. I can't stop reading the story.
Demon Wallflower is cool looking. I never liked Forgotten Friendship because someone hurt Sunset. They did for the dumbest reason too. I will visit this in my story too, and an angle with Wallflower too. I like your version better.
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Glass you like it
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Thx, I'm very proud on how this turned out.
They lived happily ever after. I hope.
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Thy do, I did plan on adding something extra to the ending but I ended up not doing it. I can explain the rest in a private message if you'd like.
Hi! I’m really excited to read this. Forgotten friendship is probably my favorite special. I’m a bit of a sucker for ‘Sunset Torture porn’. Regardless, I felt like Forgotten Friendship gave Sunset enough pain without it feeling ridiculous like in the Anon-a-miss comic.
As always, Sunset’s and Twilight’s interaction makes the story shine . I did feel it was a bit too jarring that they reached for a kiss. I probably got the timeline wrong, but wasn’t this before they began dating? It would’ve been really cute if Sunset was like imagining her kissing Twilight!
Ohhh kdfkfdjkdf. I love this twist! It honestly was kinda silly how Twilight doesn’t remember Sunset at all in FF. Like how does she think she got saved from midnight sparkle? It feels like losing her memory of Sunset would alter her character in a drastic way, and this wasn’t addressed at all in the show. Very happy you avoided this frustration.
I’ve gotta say, this characterization feels very weird. In the special, we see Sunset keep her calm even though she was in a much worse situation than she is in your story, since in yours at least Twilight remembers her. I get that you want Twilight to comfort her, but I feel there could’ve been more natural ways to do this.
In your defense, you’ve already established in your canon that your Sunset is depressive, though it feels a OCC, it shows consistency in how you’ve written her. And you could interpret Sunset as being depressive in Anon-a-miss.
Also, I thought it was a good choice to skip Sunset going to Equestrian, it would’ve broken the the flow of the story and she already had her reconciliation with Celestial in your lore.
Lmao yeah, It made no sense how in the special they’re not more convinced by the pictures. Sunset could’ve just been like. Girls. These pictures have shadows. Or just shown them a video.
I hoped the conflict between Twi and the rest of the humane 5 wouldn’t have been resolved so easily. Imagine how much interesting drama there could be if she had to choose between Sunset and her friends.
This chapter also highlights one of your strengths. You have a good grasp of how to make emotionally painful scenes. It’s good to see these scenes often accompanied by moments of tenderness between Sunset and Twi, these moments of emotional violence contrasted against characters healing from their pain gives your plots a very nice contour. I think they would benefit a lot from making them more subtle.
Furthermore, I think this chapter elevates your original Twi x Sunset confession. The fact that Sunset has been depressed before, and Twi being there to help her makes the confession in that chapter more believable.
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This story doesn't take place in the same timeline in my other stories and is why it's has the AU.
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The whole point/reason I made this was because forgotten friendship is my least favorite eqg special and I thought on making my own version but with many changes.
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Good to know.
I really like this great, wonderful story!^_^
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Thx I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I have no idea what she just said
uh oh.... she is being corrupted by power
OH CRAP