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We all know about The Elements of Harmony, what if there are seven Elements instead of six. This is the story of Silver, a talented unicorn stallion, who's one of Princess Celestia's students. He, along with Twilight Sparkle will travel to Ponyville, where their lifetime adventure will begin.

(This story is also on FanFiction and Archive of Our Own)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 21 )
Comment posted by Skywalker215 deleted Nov 21st, 2021

Great beginning and start of a great story

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Yes. What do you think about the first chapter?

Comment posted by Skywalker215 deleted Nov 21st, 2021

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I just use this and other stories to help me, since this is my first time I write a story. By the way, did you notice that in his last chapter he write the name Mario from 'The Seventh Element' from FanFiction?

Comment posted by Skywalker215 deleted Nov 21st, 2021

Great job on the start and great beginning. And adding a Stallion to the group is nice and for Twilight to have a shipper here is a great idea. Nice job, keep up the great work.

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Comment posted by Skywalker215 deleted Nov 21st, 2021

It has been so long since I have watched the show and memories are flowing back to me. :pinkiesad2:

I really liked this though, and would really want to read more of whatever you are planning with the new OC: Silver, in the future. Even though, he is supposed to be the love interest of Twilight, in some part of the story, I started shipping him and Rainbow Dash but not anymore. It is back to the original ship now, but overall, keep up the great work.

Now that was a great second chapter there. And seeing how the two elements are revealed, there will be hints in the future and some relationships growing. Awesome job there, keep up the great work

Great story keep up the awesome work!

Great chapter, and Silver being there for Twilight and talked some sense into the girls about the tickets, now that was a great friendship there. Awesome job, keep up the great work

Awesome chapter! I especially like how you made Silver be a good friend and talk some sense into the mane five :eeyup:

A great chapter! I love it! Awesome work!

Still waiting for the next chapter of this story!

You could find someone who is willing to take this story

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