There were many things Shining Armor was expecting when he got home from visiting Twilight. Seeing his daughter getting thrown out his bedroom wasn't one of them.
Things only escalate from there.
Preread by: Skeeter The Lurker
Cover art by: Glacierclear
My submission for the Cadance is a terrible mother contest
Your stories and your blogs are like two separate universes.
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As it should be.
Dude, gotta say i was not expecting this kind of misadventure. I love it
I KNOW!!! Why didn't you have a lizard? You had Kong. All this was missing was Godzilla.
Great story by the way 😜.
To quote Aldaris:
Nice job
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Given the Crystal Empire's best plumberponies have a distinctly Italian cast to them, I'd have expected Bowser.
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Funny enough the first draft of this story had the plumber speaking Italian and making a reference to everyone's favorite firebreathing Koopa.
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It's probably for the better.
Flurry would have found Bowser adorable and counts as a Princess, plus he has all those kids at home.
He'd have REALLY needed another castle. Or six.
Silver lining, I guess.
And that is another normal day in the Crystal Empire... Now I wonder if Thursday in Ponyville is mixed with Flurry playing
I felt kinda bad for the monkey, he was protecting Shining and Cadence but got zapped into non-sapience along with the snail that was attacking them.
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