"Who is more to be pitied, a writer bound and gagged by policemen or one living in perfect freedom who has nothing more to say?" - Kurt Vonnegut
Gilda has just lost her childhood friend. She feels awfully foalish at the moment. Can she ever hope to find a new one?
(This is my first one-shot. Inspired by Griffin Village's song "Winter (Gilda)". I hope that you have enough kindness in your heart to forgive her <3)
P.S. Contains some mild language.
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Gilda x OC, havent saw any of this, trackin and thumbs up
Wow. Nice one shot. I really enjoyed it.
First, I think the word griffin use for kids is cubs not foals. But thats maybe just me.
For the fic it self, It was good and I would like a sequel of it.
P.S Did you use google for the Swedish word?
Keep it coming.
Only problem I have with this is the pony terms they're using. They should have their own terms.
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Oh ok.
I'll try to edit some of it when I'm done with a chapter of my other story!
And I guess I did use google translate......Please don't hurt me
Thanks man....But i have no idea what the sequel would be about anyway.
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Duly noted sir. I shal make edites POST -HASTE
Good dayeth to you!
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Oh you did? Thanks man!
1223723 Much appreciated! ^.=.^ It's a great little one-shot otherwise.
1223720 Don't worry. I just find it interesting every time I see some Swedish thing in fic/movie.
And the sequel, It's was just a suggestion if you get some inspiration.
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This is deserves a full story
Very nice one shot. There's surprisingly little Gilda is a regular, if angry, person fics, so this is also a nice change of pace.
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Thanks man!
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Oh sorry. Swedish?
It was actually Norwegian.
If my history is correct, Norway was inhabited by the Nord/Viking culture, and since Nords/Viking/Greco-roman references/terms popularly make up Griffin culture, I decided to slide in a few words in Norwegian.
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We shall see
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oh and thanks for not bursting in and shouting "FIRST!!!!"
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well im not a douchebag right?
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For your non-douchbaggery I shalt give you a cookie, kind sir!
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1227522 Sweden had Nord/Viking culture too you know. But our language is almost the same.
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Oh sorry if i sounded ignorant for second there. God I need to stop being a hippocrite; People already have trouble distinguishing me from the nearest Asian guy....
Well I learned something new today. Thanks for telling me!
This. It is YESSSSSSSSS. Write more.
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Oh sorry. This was a one-shot story. I'm afraid that I won't be able to get anymore "writing" material out of this one....But keep an eye out. I MIGHT come back to this one
this is good but one thing in your story you said foals wouldn't they be cubs or fledglings or something like that since they aren't ponies
also i have 11 changelings they would like to give you something
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Sorry, I tried to divy up things to not sound monotonous. Cubs, foals, chicks = Same thing in the story =Offspring of griffins.
And love? For me? THANK YOU!!!!
It was my changelings that did that it takes alot more to get love from me main reason is because my changelings are using it for food and i have not found a changeling (except for on some occasions queen chrysalis) where I can say no to them
Just to be a bastard...
Not sure if 'now' is a typo or not.
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Aaaand a few other typos, but you get it... Other than that, this is a solid story that I had a great time reading.
Very, very impressive, I would say Gilda is acting out of who she is but she is a bit of a bitch, the thing the makes her my third favorite villain is the fact that you can tip her just with a little bit more motive and destructive thoughts then she could be one who kills her enemies, which is what I love, though she can also be redeemed as well as a full hero with the right wording and background, I love Gilda, you did a great job
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Awww, Gee thanks :D
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GRRRRRRRRR!
2635162 Never a problem, oh GODS, you're the author of Flash Fog, hey? It's an honor
Unless I got you confused with a different author, my bad yet I know I heard your name before....still honored LOL.
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Wut.... I'm not the author of Flash Fog xD
2635270 Sorry thought you were
2635162 You didn't return the bloody slab!
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Fuck me. I thought I left that episode behind in my childhood....
2638430 Can I take you out to dinner first?