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It's a new semester at the School of Friendship. Things take an interesting turn when some new students join the school. New students doesn't sound so bad, until everypony finds out that the new students have come from the Crown Tundra. The School of Friendship's students will be dealing with some new creatures who are a lot more different than the Young Six.
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Is this going to be a Pokemon crossover by chance?
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No, it not a crossover
It's a good start, but I see several spelling errors on this chapter.
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Really, where, try to spot them out but can't
Correct: "Why should I be calm, Spike?!"
Correct: I did some research on other nations so I can spread friendship to those nations, but when I read about Crown Tundra. I was...scared."
Correct: "Scared of what?" Spike asked.
Correct: "Scared that she may make a bad impression and I don’t blame her,”
Correct: Because if they are, then she is even more beautiful than Rarity and that coming is from him.
Correct: He can tell how pretty I am. Am I right, Spike?
Correct: The name's Winter, white as snow and cold as the seasons,” Winter said, with a grin
Correct: The students that I bought already knows about friendship, but I like to see what you have to offer,
Correct: The ice dragon greets, causing Spike to scream in shock and fright as he jumps into the air and lands in Twilight arm who also has the same shock look on her face.
Correct: Behind the grinning ice dragon is a white and blue griffon, a gray yak and a white and cyan kirin who all have the same grinning look.
Correct: Wait? Where? How?” Spike tried to say, as Winter laughed at the young dragon reaction
Correct: My proud children I never have,
Correct: It's not every day that she she yak wear goggles
Correct: What he is trying to say is that...Well,
To put it in a short note he has a short temper and you have to be careful of what you say around him.
Correct: I understand and thanks for the heads up.
These are all of the spelling and grammar errors I have found.
L’inizio mi piace, lo trovo interessante, non vedo l’ora del prossimo capitolo
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Fix and thank
Hey Crown Tundra I know that place it's in Pokemon sword and shield which I did not finish the game yet still working on it
To be honest I would say Pokemon but it's not a crossover so your guess is as good as mine lol
It's okay Twilight you got this we believe in you
Ohhh something tells me this kid is going to be problematic
Thanks
Well it looks like Twilight is getting more new students which it's always good to have and this new island called Crown Tundra and looks like we're meeting up with new kids hopefully things will go very well because these kids are going into the unknown ( yeah I went there 😅 lol ) but anyway pretty interesting start can't wait to see how this will work out
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Thank