• Member Since 23rd May, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 18th, 2023

DerpyJr


T

Trace, a pony hater of mass proportions, somehow ends up in the world of Equestria. In the beginning he equates the world to hell, but as time goes on he finds himself growing fond of the colorful equines. Of course he can't stay there forever...or can he?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Hmmmm... A little sudden with the entrance into Equestria and introduction to twilight but you have caught my interest.

Interesting! Watching with curiosity! :pinkiehappy:

An interesting protagonist, the 'anti-brony teleported to Equestria' cliche made anew. Normally the anti-brony is abrasive and made unlikeable and unsympathetic until character development later in the story when they have inevitably been converted. This character is human, he is not some fun-killing sterotype but instead someone who happens to dislike the show. The conflict with his friends was realistic for someone of their age, as was the spark that set it off.
Simply put, he comes off as a lonely boy from a neglectful home that happens to dislike FIM rather than a collection of traits, and that is something to be applauded.
"I fell asleep and woke up in Ponyland" is rather overdone, but acceptable, while an original form of transmission would have been preferred this will do quite nicely.

Awaiting more:
-BlackWinter

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Please?:fluttercry:

Login or register to comment