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Wow. Never expected to see that name again.
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I could say the same thing about you! At least, over the course of one night...
Enjoying this fine feature fic?
A rewrite to a re-write to a story? I'm getting tired.
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It’s not another rewrite. I was finally allowed by the mods to bring the updated original chapters I’d been keeping out in google docs directly into the story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/963594/good-news
So it’s not rewritten; I’m just finally able to post them here where they belong.
It is great to see all the rewritten chapters being allowed up with all the brand new ones.
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Nah. This is tomorrow's reading. I just finished the video I was watching and now it's bed time.
Unless Dana has somehow snuck back in, this should be Tara.
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You’re telling me. That dual-site arrangement I had before was awkward to say the least.
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Welcome to the story, and hope you enjoy!
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Oops. Fixed, along with a few other issues I found.
Sounds like the marines need to break out the speakers and rock.
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You’re not wrong! And actually, that’s not a bad idea... I may end up using it later!
Very good chapter.
Great worldbuilding. I like the military structure a lot.
I guess he got railed by someone wile riding Gilda?
Happens when one hands seem to be all over the place...
Marco should totaly cook again! This time without spiked Cider
Marco, human Chef Supreme
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Thanks. I’ve realized that I’m still being a bit inconsistent with who gets what armor, so I’m going to have to work that out and then carefully check through the story to make sure everything is congruent.
If you mean Marco, you’ll find out the answer in due course. Or actually, the end of the latest Eros chapter gives a pretty conclusive answer!
In both the figurative and literal senses! And that being the case, I think you’ll like the end of the next chapter. I’ll be releasing it very soon.
Hmm...
I think I might once more be falling into one of your traps.
Since none of the griffons can remember the details of Midway or any other movie they may or may not have been exposed to, then Marco's never going to get into trouble over it, even if the Captain finds out what's in the recorded video he took of that night. The magical drugs wiped their memories, so Marco's in the clear.....
However, I suspect that if Gilda, Fortrakt, and Giraldi are forcibly exposed to what happened--such as just sitting through and watching the recording as they can't recall anything of the sex they had--so even if Captain Moran allows them see an edited version of that night (such as cutting out the replay of Midway) so that they all could put their minds to ease about what they did to each other--I wonder if being confronted with those events might cause them to suddenly remember EVERYTHING!?
Could become a big oops for Marco!!
We need the 'bow-chicka-wow-wow' video for world peace Let's make it happen! Peace trough mutual enjoyable porn... DAMN! I might add it as joke in one of my storys
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Possible but unlikely. I love when unlikely happens
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Sooo... What is Gildas rank on the story cover?
Also... I think a arrow to the ass might be a common problem in the Griffon military...
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I’ve been going through the story and finding a lot of old comments I never replied to, including this one. I’m sorry. Let me fix that right now:
Excellent. *steeples fingers*
Only if it stays that way. And it didn’t so much as wipe their memories as bury them so deeply that they can’t reach them. That doesn’t preclude being able to recall bits and pieces of it over time. Or even more it there’s a traumatic enough event or something happens to spark those memories...
Well, as usual, I have an answer, but to tell you would be to spoil it. Just stay tuned for the next chapter I plan to release this coming week, where there will be yet another major revelation concerning that night. I will say this, though: knowing what you probably now know from Eros, how well do you really think they’d take seeing what happened and everything they did? Would it put their minds at ease? Or would it have just the opposite effect?
Well, Marco has already had his big oopsie moment in the later chapters and you know what happened to him, albeit unfairly. Remember also that it’s been implied that he remembers some stuff too, and is not comfortable with it. As always, you’ll learn more about that as you go.
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Ah, if only the world’s problems could all be solved so easily! Fine, you can call Eros my contribution to the cause of Harmony between nations.
Like I said to him, just wait until my coming chapter release next week.
Tribune. But she’s still a couple promotions away from reaching it.
Well, certainly more than a few griffon officers and nobles have a stick up their ass.
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or worse being an adventurer like the odd griffion and getting an arrow in the knee
do they even have knees though?
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They do indeed have elbows and knees.
I love your military lore