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blacwido


Writer mostly into the romantic fics. Wanna read one of my fics on your youtube channel? Go right ahead, as long as you send me the link to it after so I can watch it too :)

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[Before Reading]
Wait... THE alicorn of dreams doesn't know sex ed? How can she not after experiencing MANY of such dreams. Even if she doesn't partake of dreamers she knows are having the "GOOD" dreams she HAS to interrupt rape nightmares or those who are having nightmares about terrible sexual performance(or something I duno what to put here).

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Sorry for the confusion I changed it. She does know the concept of sex, what intercourse is and that it has to be done to conceive a foal. But she hasn’t had the chance to do it herself.

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okay...THAT makes more sense.

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Yea again apologies for the confusion, feel free to give the story a thumbs up if you liked it :twilightsmile:

“I’m not that old Anon, me and my sister are only over 9,000 years old.” Luna responded giving Anon an annoyed glance, making him regret his question.

Was that a Dragon Ball reference i just saw?!

“Ok ascend and descend your mouth up and down and lick around my penis, just make sure you don’t go too low or you’ll choke again.” Anon tells her half laughing while doing so, it kinda sounded like he was trying to teach her how to swim or something.

Is Anon going to curl his anterior arboard phalanges into Luna's adipose gluteus maximus in the meantime? Clinical terms aren't sexy. Leave them out of attempts at pillow talk unless Twilight Sparkle herself tells you to-and I quote-'talk nerdy to me'.

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I agree with this 100% I just put it in to add awkwardness and cringe to the story. :twilightsmile:

“Uuuuuu maa” she heard him say something as Anon then started to move slightly making Luna flap into the air for a brief moment, he seemed to be stretching while still asleep.

"Uma" is the japanese word for horse

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I didn’t know that, complete coincidence! :rainbowlaugh:

I don't know why this made me laugh for some parts of it, but I loved this story lol, good job!

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Thanks, glad you liked it.

I have read this back from 2021 and things have changed over time... I say you did pretty ok. There might be 1 part i still might question though.

But Princess Celestia and her sister Princess Luna offered him a room to stay in at the castle, this seemed to cheer him up as he felt much better about his situation.

Try reading this part. Do you know what's wrong with it?

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Sadly no I don’t, let me know what it is and I’ll fix it.

Actually is it the “stay in at” part? I’ll delete “in” and just leave it as “stay at the castle”.

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But, (however)

Princess Celestia and her sister Princess Luna
(Princess Celeatia and Princess Luna)[because we already know they are sister unless Princess Celestia has another sister that I didn't know about.]

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Oh thank you so much for pointing that out, I’ll fix them right away.

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Also cross off the at from in (at) the castle...

However, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna offered him a room to stay in the castle,

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