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Firestar and his family get lost in Equestria.
This occurs between Outcast and Eclipse in the Power of three for Warriors and shortly after The Hearth’s Warming Club(Season 8 Episode 15) for My Little Pony. Contains spoilers for both series.
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what is this a crossover with?
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Warriors, also known as Warrior Cats. I've only read the first 12 books, but my sister is an expert on the series. They were good, but once I forgot enough that I would have to start over, I never got around to it.
I love that book series
Why not make them all Abyssians?
Well, this is interesting. I have’t read the Warriors series in years, but still remember it. Can’t wait to see where this story goes.
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Being turned into Ponies makes them blend in better. It gives them more challenges to overcome. And, most importantly, we totally forgot the Abyssians.
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I hope this lives up to your expectations and does both series justice.
I like the story being told, but it feels like it's moving too quickly. Take it up a notch, really push yourself to improve on the details of what's happening and how the characters are feeling about it. The story will only get better for it.
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Thank you for your input. I will try to do that more in the next chapters. That is probably the hardest part for me but I agree that it is important.
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The best way to improve is to keep writing, so I look forward to seeing how you progress.
Terribly sorry about the wait. Working with a co-author makes scheduling much harder. I had intended on getting chapter 3 out before they left town for a month.
How many chapters long will this story be?
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We don't have a detailed enough draft to say for certain. This story will almost certainly be more than 10,000 words at it's completion, but more specific answers will only be revealed with time. Probably at least 15 but not more than 100.
P.S. It does have a definite ‘end’ we have planned, but we’re not entirely sure how many words it will be until we get there.
Things are getting interesting. Looking forward to seeing how the cats continue to react and adapt to this unfamiliar culture. Squirrelflight at least is taking things in stride.
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My favorite scene so far has to be when she talks to Lyra. "I tripped." "All three of you?" "There is only one, the others are all in your head." Makes me laugh every time.
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Seems pretty sus
Thank you for updating
Aww, poor Squirrelflight. Nice chapter though
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Morning: "Yep, Squirrelflight deserves your sympathy. Sadly I think she's going to be stuck with Brambleclaw for a while."
I do not get these people. (The cats, not you two.)
P.S. Thank you for your comments, I love hearing from you all. 10873192, 10759520, 10872568
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Yeah...
Ooh, I like the chapter, great job!
Ooh, nice chapter!
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I'm glad you like it.
Can't wait for the next one
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Can't wait? On the one hand, that's obviously a rousing endorsement, and I appreciate it. But I'm afraid you may have to. Hopefully not another three months, but only time will tell.
Either way, I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you continue to do so.
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Yeah! I like Hollypaw and Crowfeather's chance to connect
Poor Jaypaw...
Aw, poor Lionpaw, he must be so confused...
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Better make that two experts, I've read quite a few of the books too
Jaypaw definitely is the kinda cat to get along well with both bookbug and time-pone, hope we get to see them interact again
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Yep. Can't wait to see the three of them get together and do some serious science that would make Starclan blush
A lot of characters. As I am not very familiar with warrior cats, I won't know any of them. I hope the story does well in introducing each character in further chapters. They were also very fast to jump into a portal to the unknown without planning ahead or leaving a contingency plan for the rest of their clan. Still, I quite liked the interactions and how flippant the characters were surrounding the issue. It was a good chapter. I'm not sure whether the characters were supposed to sound more serious about this.