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PegPony
I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
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11 months later Twily and Shiny have a zony half-brother.
Good story.
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Thanks! I appreciate your advise :)
10714578
Thanks! Not sure I'm gonna pursue the half-brother thing though, glad you enjoyed it! :)
That was good but i too was hoping we'd get a sequel where Velvet got pregnant and gave birth not to a "Zony" but a full fledged Zebra foal. Just write it like Enzo's zebra genetics were way more dominant than Velvet's pony genetics. Sadly as you said there will be no sequel, oh well. After all we don't alway's get what we want.
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Well I never said it was impossible, if you really want it I could write a sequel or have the birth of the zebra as an epilogue.
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Either works for me
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You got it! :)
Fun ending though i was hoping Velvet would keep the zebra foal and raise it with the same love as Twi and Shiny. I was also hoping that they would meet their half-sibling. Oh well. Still i can't think of a better adoptive mother than Zecora. Hell at least Shining and Twi can still visit him if they so desire. All in all thank you for granting your fans an epilogue to this great story
Holy shit, that is a lot of run-on sentences.
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Sorry that it didn't quite go how you expected, but thank you for your heartfelt thanks, I try to do my best :)
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Sorry! Grammar has never been one of my strong points, if you tell me how to fix them, I will gladly do so :)
10717084
Okay. Let's try a paragraph from Pounded Pussy, Pounded Ponut.
Now this lends itself to a lot of instances for full-on periods rather than commas. For instance, rather than this:
Try this:
So, in the end, it could end up looking like this:
I hope this helps a bit.
10717363
That certainly helped indeed! I made the changes you suggested and hopefully my future stories will be much better.
brother or sister is because of the profile picture, this is one of the few stories that just by reading a chapter I get excited 10x10 you have my respect.
and ask if they accept suggestions or is it on commission.
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I take requests, if you have a story you want me to write, tell me the idea and I'll consider it.
11030645
to someone like you, I am somewhat perverted on that subject, I have several ideas, for example four that just occurred to me:
1: in a daring do adventure in the land of the zebras you end up having an unforgettable "adventure" with a village shaman.
2: zecora's brother arrives in ponyville in the middle of the rutting season.
3: prince artemis in the dream world keeps nightmare versions at bay through quite lusty methods, being nightmare moon, nightmare rarity, daybreaker and midnight sparkle
4: once a year the rulers of equestria meet with a single goal to please prince solaris, the rulers are twilight, cadence, queen novo, ember, radiant hope (it's from the comics) and luna
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Those are interesting ideas! Unfortunately I won't be writing all of them, but I might do the Zecora one in future.
11030755
one is enough, I don't ask for much
Huh, 33 upvotes, 33 downvotes. Perfectly balanced, as all things should be.