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Spring is in the air! The girls are seniors in their last semester of school at CHS. Nothing says happy spring like a Friday night out on the town for a dinner date. Rarity is set up on a blind by their former rivals now friends from Crystal Prep Academy. The fashionista is happy to get out and give romance a chance, but like any good set of friends Applejack, Sunset Shimmer and company want Rarity to know that if the date doesn't go well that she can always call in for help with the secret code word: Tippy Toe.

Takes place four months before the events of Incarnate

Sex tag is for young adult/adult topic discussions. Sorry, no sexy time if that was what you were looking for.

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Rarity rolled her eyes and smiled, poking a toe into her host’s side. “Applejack and I? Can you imagine that? Well, maybe you can, I have seen your art and you have quite the imagination. No, we are wonderful friends, but what we want in our lives would sour anything romantic there. At least you didn’t say Rainbow Dash or I would have to question if you know me at all.”

And the RariJack ship just got sunk. Well, in this universe anyway.

I look forward to these short stories. At least, I assume they're gonna be short one-off stories after two long full-length stories.

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I'm currently outlining the next big follow up to Gods and Monsters but yeah, mostly going to be short stories till I get it the way I like it to move forward.

10716043
Well stories like these should keep me sated until some big comes
(No pressure or anything, take care of yourself first:twilightsmile:)

Could you possibly do a follow-up chapter where someone at the restaurant recorded the whole scene with sunset kissing rarity and it was posted online? Now the two girls have to convince their friends that they aren't dating?

10823162
That... Could actually be funny. Especially where Twilight kind of fumbles about trying to act as if she's not into it. Let me think about it and see if anything comes together.

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I have a couple of ideas in case you need any suggestions.

10823190
Applejack could secretly be jealous that she wasn't able to kiss rarity.

10823192
I'll let it rattle around inside my head and if I manage to jot down a bonus chapter I will post a blog update pointing to it and compliments to you for tossing the idea out there.

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I had an idea for an opening scene. Sunset and Rarity arrive at school the next day together and they notice that everyone is looking at them and whispering. The two girls are confused by this and then their friends confront them about their "relationship".

The phone must have had some great hardware and software, Sunset thought as she was able to easily make out all the details of her outfit she had worn the night before to rescue Rarity in. Sunset’s eyes pupils shrank to pinpricks and she began to blush a bit when the camera focused on her ass in the skin tight jeans as she bent over to talk to Rarity. The details on the exchange running through her head as the audio only picked up bits of the conversation. Damn, I really do have a nice backside. I guess that makes sense. Not to feed my ego or anything, but my plot was always one of my best features as a pony as well.

I get that this is before Incarnate, but she inherited that from her dear old mother, didn't she?

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Yes, as mentioned in the teaser this is four months before Incarnate. And if you got a nice butt don't be ashamed to be proud of it!

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I only mentioned that since I was aware Sunset wouldn't know her true parentage yet :twilightsmile: (which would also explain this:

“No, Flash, we are not a thing. It was me being a good friend and rescuing her from a bad date in an unconventional way. Sweet Celestia’s snowy white plot, it was just a damn kiss, what is wrong with people?! No, there is no chance you are going to get in a threesome so wipe that smug look off your face or I will pound the fantasy right out of your silly boy head.”

and why she would call her still-unknown mother by her name.)

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I have found numerous examples of ponies using Celestia's name as a stand in curse. Like saying "Jesus Christ on a pogo stick!". Or something like that. It has nothing to do with parentage as much as she is a semi deity.

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True, and because of that, after the events of Incarnate any Celestia-related swears or curses would be a slip of the tongue, plus she wouldn't be used to her former mentor being her mother until after some time of correspondence, (if that makes any sense, force of habit is what I'm getting at)

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Yup! Imagine trying to curse and it coming out as, Oh, Holy Mother of... Me."

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