Twilight gets into some Timey Wimey nonsense and meet a couple of fillies. You may know them
Inspired by: My Two Most Faithful Students
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okay 2 things
1 you briefly switch perspective between first and 2nd when she smells the hay burgers.
2 forsy.... is this supposed to be ponish.... if so just dont its incredibly confusing
other than that you have my attention
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Thanks for catching that. Accidentally went third person mid-writing for some reason also https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/939269/pony-numbers
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ahh i see this must be the brother of the drunk mathematician who invent the Imperial system by throwing dice you know the one with a lisp
also pfft base 6
BASE 3 FOR LIFE!!
1,2,3, LOTS, LOADS, MANY,
much simpler
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also if im translating that right is equestria in a gravity well cause
About Onety Tensy-One years later
111 years later
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Nah, it's 43. Ponies live until 300 about
This is something I look forward to reading more. After all, there are not that many stories surprisingly of Twilight time traveling back and meeting small filly Celestia and Luna...
This is amazing btw!
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I have a few comments about "My Little Students." First, I liked the way you used words like "blanket" and "pillow" that describe familiar objects to make your story more accessible to young children. Your images are very clear and appealing, too. Second, I think it's important to point out that this story is told from the perspective of an adult who is looking at children as if they were animals or objects. I used to teach my children about https://www.careersbooster.com/our-services/linkedin-profile/ source so they could get better knowledge before hiring a LinkedIn profile writer. I think it would be great if you could find a way to explore how people actually see themselves in this situation (i.e., as humans). If possible, try drawing or painting your own picture from the perspective of one of your little students!