Oops... Pinkie and Twilight made a little mistake and Sunset is not amused, and her date is tonight, with her new/old boyfriend, Flash Sentry, and she comes up with a plan to get back at them with some help from he friends and principals Luna and Celestia.
Okay, I just had a idea pop into my head and had to make a story of it, when I saw this picture I was like, What the heck happened to her hair?! Feel free to deliver criticism and I will always take tips on how to improve my story!
Chapters (2)
Well, if you don't mind me pointing things out in the description:
"Criticism" and "Improve".
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Sorry, it’s like really late right right now and I didn’t realize what time it was, I’v been misspelling a lot of things this week since it’s been a little hectic, thanks, I’ll fix it.
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I really like the story and
it deserves a like from me
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Thanks! Sorry I didn’t answer back sooner, It was like, really late where I live, thanks for liking my story, I had fun writing it! Do you want a second fic about Sunset’s revenge?
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hmm
I'm thinking
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Good one, okay, I will come up with a sequel. :)
Okay, I just renamed the first chapter and I am adding on to it!
Ah, another Flashshimmer to add to my collection.
Hope to see another chapter soon.
Adding it and putting a like *
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Thank you for liking my story! Sunset’s Revenge will be added soon!
Vengeance is mine!!!!!!
Mwahahahaha!
It's a shame there are no Sunset stickers to use around here.
It Waac good but there were a few typos actually
Sure was good but there's still several mistakes needing fixing
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Yhea, sorry about the typos. I’ll go back through it and fix it. I was really tired when I wrote it. Also, I agree we need to get some Sunset stickers into this site, she has a huge amount of stories under her folder, she’s one of the best characters.
This is a really cute story!!
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Thank you, glad you liked it. Nice avatar.
It was definitely rough. It needs polishing in some areas and could use a little pacing here and there. The ideas are good and still funny enough to enjoy, but could use more believable dialogue and better descriptors
Love the story.
Keep doing more stories.