Icing for that Muffin (A Short Story)

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Synesisbassist

Synesisbassist #1 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · ·

Honestly not a bad little fic. Just a nice bite sized morning clop story. Only saw one "major" issue.

"Good morning, sleepy head. How's thay feel?"

I'm sure "thay" should be "that." Otherwise it was fairly alright.

BoxenMyBoot

BoxenMyBoot #2 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · ·

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Yeah. Thx. Sorry about that. ^^;

Vauria

Vauria #3 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · ·

Quite a few mistakes, especially in the first paragraph, but overall short, sweet, hot.

It was early morning and she had been awaken one of the great ways for her, besides to the smell of freshly baked banana muffins; her kind, yet lustfully shameless stud muffin had sunk his morning wood inside her[...]

It was early morning and she had been awoken in the best way possible—besides the smell of freshly baked banana muffins—her kind, yet shamelessly lustful stud muffin had sunk his morning wood inside her[...]

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