Applejack Finally Get's LAID!

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Is Rainbow Dash also a virgin in this story?

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #2 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · 2 ·

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What's with the dislikes?! Is it because of Beastility??!!

Oops door

Oops door #3 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · ·

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10709464
Perfect idea for a sequel or even entire series that all the main six have never slept with a stallion but they’ve all been with mare or did nothing at all and they’re all in a really nervous and it’s just adorable

lusians

lusians #4 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 5 · 1 ·

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10709632
Bestiality >>> fucking an animal who dosent have human level of inteligence.
Zoophilia >>> having an animal fetish example : requesting partner wears socks with animal images or motives or partner dreses up in stylized animal get up >>> cat/dog ears and tail ect...
Dont confuse and misuse terms internet is alredy full of misused terms.

NinjaMare

NinjaMare #5 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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10709464
no she's had sex, she just finds it boring. not enough, excitement.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #6 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · ·

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10709799

Sorry.

10709801

Guess she didn't find the right partner yet.

quakeSanchez

quakeSanchez #7 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 1 · 2 ·

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Show, don't tell. Your story opens with a long, detached narration about AJ's sex life, and it's quite boring to read. There are plenty of ways to let readers know what they need to know (or, better yet, help them figure it out). It's not exciting when your narration simply tells us stuff.

Applejack is, a virgin! surprising right? you would think

Proofread your desciption and capitalize sentences properly, please.

Mostly due because of her.

What's that supposed to mean?

It all started like any other day, plain and un-eventful

As if we were not bored enough already! Seriously, was this clishe ever good in a story?

Music: Red Hot Chilli Peppers – Californication – Fingerstyle Guitar Cover by James Bartholomew.
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_jIkfSVNkU

Seriously?

10709632
Or it may be quality of writing.

NinjaMare

NinjaMare #8 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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10709934

Show, don't tell. Your story opens with a long, detached narration about AJ's sex life, and it's quite boring to read.

a lot of clopfics feature this, as there about the sex, not a multi-chapter story that leads to it. especially if its a one-shot clop that's not relying on a overarching story. this is meant for a quick fun read, nothing else.

i do appreciate your critiques, thanks. and i did just edited it.

hoodini667

hoodini667 #9 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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applejack finally get’s LAID

FINALLY and it took THIS long god dam it

(Joke)

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #10 · Mar 6th, 2021 · · 2 ·

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10709934

I like the Writing.

10709965

NinjaMare is right with the Sex One-Shot Stories.

Red_Beard

Red_Beard #11 · Mar 6th, 2021 · 12 · 4 ·

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Strange proportion of dislikes for this story. Don't get me wrong, I don't think it's a masterpiece, but it's not offensive and is like 90% grammatically sound. I've seen worse do better. Guess the day and time really matters for this stuff.

sxcbeast

sxcbeast #12 · May 27th, 2021 · 4 · 1 ·

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10710447
haven't read it yet; but autism has become rampant on this site since the finale.

Shadowblade019

Shadowblade019 #13 · Jun 19th, 2021 · · 1 ·

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Anon isn’t ashamed to just fucking any pony that asks him, and he doesn’t discriminate on who ask’s him, whether a pony is married or not, mare or stallion, if a pony is down for a night in the sack and ask’s the human to join.
Corrupted rainbow fuck-wit!

joElecTeen

joElecTeen #14 · Feb 10th, 2023 · · ·

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“Wish granted.” Ceasing his thrusting for just the briefest of moments, which made Applejack scrunch up her muzzle in confusion, and irritation, but the mare was again surprised when Anon spun her around, his dick stirring the mare’s inside, as she was now directly facing Anon before being lifted up. Hands firmly grasping her flanks as the humans holds her up, and pinning her against the three.

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It was now late noon, and as the sun started to make its descent on the vast horizon, at the entrance to the Everfree the figures of Applejack and Anon came shambling out. Both seemingly unable to walk straight, which was reasonable as they’ve spent two hours just fucking each other like wild animals. Or more accurately, Applejack fucked Anon like a wild Anon, while the human just rode it out and simply enjoyed the experience. As the pair left the forest behind them, Anon finished putting his shirt back on, as Applejack re-adjust her hat. But as she tried to strut out of the forest, the mare’s tail was still hiked up and was openly revealing her thoroughly abused marehood. While a very satisfied look adorns the mare’s face.

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“And ah can finally say ah ain’t no virgin no more.” The mare said as she rubbed up against Anon’s leg, causing the human to slid a hand under her hat, and scratch her ears. “You better be willing to go for a few more meet-ups like this hun, cause now that ah got a taste, ah want to make sure ah can get more.” Anon just gave the mare a sideways glance as he gave his reply.

Clawfoot