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Cloud Ring


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Loosely inspired by Trixie kicks a Bigot.

The world is not consistent with any other of my worlds, nor does it represent any world I have particularly strong feelings for it or against it.

The world does not attack or demean any other of your worlds. We are fine to coexist in multiverse.

Proofread by awesome Koekelbag.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 13 )
Huk

Wait... did she use her magic to connected Lyra and Bon Bon in their dreams and made them have sex, or something:rainbowderp:?

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You are pretty on point, yes. One of main points in that lengthy argument that had been the cause for this small piece was the 'bigots can influence people!'.

I took the idea and played with it.

Tis an interesting read (even tho it could use a proofreader :twilightblush:)

Hmm. Very interesting take on this, and a good point about how hatred and bigotry are self-defeating.

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Where was Chapter 2 then, if you don't count that my blog post?

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Chapter two was Titty's story.

Huk

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Damn, that influence was pretty literal in here :rainbowdetermined2: Nice idea, and execution.

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Wait, what? Where? I don't see Titty posting any story related to the blog:rainbowhuh:?

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Ah, shit, sorry, found it. Must be going blind :twilightsheepish:

Interesting take, and certainly tells a more powerful message than my story.

Interestingly, one of my jobs is working with developmentally disabled adults, some of who have had a really rough go at life up until they got into the system (and sometimes even after they did; the mental health system in the US is largely a disgrace), and I know one guy who went from being a 1:1 (we had to have eyes on him unless he was in the bathroom, alone, or asleep in his bedroom) to being able to have his own apartment with staff just stopping by to help him out with daily tasks he couldn’t do.

Sometimes all it takes is a gentle touch.

I also really like the idea of making dream catchers.

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Glad you appreciated it.
And yes, the world is more detailed than it's shown, and I may explore it further sometime.
One of these details that were left out of the scope is, yes, Elusive Dream being under supervision. In the omitted, implied part of the story, that is. Hope the take does not offend you as an expert.

My main criticism is that I would have preferred to SEE what is being described and exposed in the story, like, I would have loved to see all these events unfold through several chapters.
Would love to read a sequel.

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Glad you appreciated it.

Thanks!

And yes, the world is more detailed than it's shown, and I may explore it further sometime.

If the muse strikes, I would be interested in seeing more . . . drop me a line if you do a followup :heart:

One of these details that were left out of the scope is, yes, Elusive Dream being under supervision. In the omitted, implied part of the story, that is. Hope the take does not offend you as an expert.

No, that doesn’t offend me at all. In fact, if you want some hot takes on the good, bad, and indifferent of that, I’m more than willing to bend your ear. We’ve got various supervision levels for our clients for various reasons and sometimes the protocol gets weird but it is what it is.

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